Jab hum chotey they!

[Z.]

Urdu ki kitab mey aik nazam thi ...ho sakta hai aap ko bhi yaad ho ..... :P
chalein nahi yaad to mey bata deyti hun

Insaano key dil mey bacho
ik payaar ka darya behta hai
jo aankh sey ojhal rehta hai

leykin dunya mey kabhi kabhi
lagta hai kuch itna acha
wo chaand ki jhil mil kirnein hon
ya rim jhim paani barish ka
ya aeysa ho insaan koi
jo itna payaara hamein lagey
hum bol nahi kuch paatey hein
chup chaap kharey reh jaatey hein

tab aik anokhey jadu sey
barish hoti hai lafzon ki
jo geet rasseela gaatey hein
aur hum shayar ban jaatey hein

jab dil per chot lagey gehri
aur ansoo peena mushkil ho
asaan lagey bas mar jana
dukh seyh ker jeena mushkil ho

tab aik anokhey jadu sey
hoti hai barish lafzon ki
jo geet raseela gaatey hein
aur hum shayar ban jaatey hein

tha koi zamaana jab shayar
jadugar samjhey jatey they
kya sach much hein wo jadugar
ye bheyd kisi ney kab paya!


ik baat magar sab ney maani
jab dil sey nikley shayr koi
ker deyta hai hum per jaadu
wo sab ko acha lagta hai
aur bilkul sacha lagta hai

.....

['SamRazi']

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

Buhut zabardast ..........
wese yeh humarey syllabus mei to nahi thi, magar parh ker buhut achi lagi, thanks for sharing Gul :phool:

[fari]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

Beautiful poem.:blush: ...Thanks for sharing:phool: barg-e-gul jee

[Z.]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

@ Saima sis

thanks .... where u have been disappeared??



@fari

you welcome :P

[Spy009]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

Wo din kitney achhey thay
Jab ham chhotey thay

Kabhi half, kabhi full pant pehna kartey thay
Padosiyon ko satatey
Ilahi chacha ka amrood churatey
Kabhi cinema dekhney chaley jaatey
Kabhi tairney nadi bhag jaatey

Ghar aatey to Abbu se maar khatey

Class ke baad 1 ka sikka haath mein miltay
1 Rupee lekar Bashir ka chaat dukan jaatye
50 ka khatey, 50 bachatey
Badley mein Bashir ka tyre puncture kar aatey

Kya dhoom kya dharka
Kya mauj kya masti ke din thay
Wo din kitney achhey thay
Jab ham chhotey thay


This is not poem...

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

ni mujy nahi yaad..........

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

:D Ahan boht khoob gul ji.....:blush:
lekin ye to hamaray syllabus mein bhi nahin thi :embarasse

[MuQadas]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

acha app kabhi chotay bhi thay gud

[Mrs.Khan]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

Zabar10

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

acha app kabhi chotay bhi thay gud

q aap nahin thay kia:hhh:

['SamRazi']

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

@ Saima sis

thanks .... where u have been disappeared??

mei ek ouran tashtari mei baith gayi thi yeh samajh ker ek nakli hai, magar wo mujhe lai ouri :p :hehe:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

mei ek ouran tashtari mei baith gayi thi yeh samajh ker ek nakli hai, magar wo mujhe lai ouri :p :hehe:

shuker hy os main ALiens nahi thy sab apny hee bandy thy:ghug:

['SamRazi']

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

shuker hy os main ALiens nahi thy sab apny hee bandy thy:ghug:

haan magar aliens dekhney ki meri khuwahish hasrat ban ker reh gayi :lol

[Masood]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

mei ek ouran tashtari mei baith gayi thi yeh samajh ker ek nakli hai, magar wo mujhe lai ouri :p :hehe:

... phir tum ney itni batein ki hongi itna dimagh chata hoga un becharon ka keh unhon ney emergency meeting bulaii ho gi aur tumhein foran sey pehley chorr ker bhag gaey hon gey :khi: aur phir uskey baad duniya ka rukh nahin kiya ho ga :p

[MuQadas]

Re: Jab hum chotey they!

q aap nahin thay kia:hhh:

awain likh dia tha na :P