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Assalam-o-Alaikum ..... Concern authorities .... kia Pegham per is qisam ki language use ki jati hai ..... Administration se guzarish hai k is post aur is se above posts ko ghor se parhen aur faisla karen k kon galat hai .... aur kon sahi .... in janab ne above posts ko parha bhi nai hai aur is qism ki guftgoo ki hai ....

Post: Anjum's Designed Poetry
Forum: Ghazalein
Assigned Moderators: shakeeel, Gul, HumSafar, kutkutariyaan

Posted by: Mani16
Original Content:

maani ...... Men aapke liey sirf itna hi kahunga .... K agar aap kisi per objection karen to aap per lazim hai k aap uska alternate zarur den take pata chale k aap ne objection "tanqeed baraey tameer" kia hai na ke "tanqeed baraey tanqeed" alfaz ka sahara lena aur bat hoti hai mani ... Aur apni feelings ko alfaz ka roop dena aur bat ..... Agar shairi sirf alfaz ka sahara hi lene ki bat hoti to aaj har gali kooche men shahir bikhre pare hote .... But kuke aisa nai hai .... Is liey next time aap jab bhi kabhi kisi per objection karen to us se pehle us ka strong reason aur phir uska solution zarur zehn men rakhiey ga ...... Aur agar aap k khayal men hum dono theek bat kar rahe the to phir aap ko baghair kisi reason k apni taang nai arani chahiey thi .... Jab 2 bare bat karen to choton ko khamosh rehna chahiey ..... Men aap k liey apne previous quote men se selected answer hi suggest karunga ..... Zara ghor se ise smjne ki koshish karen ..... aur alfaz dekh kar ghabra mat jaiey ga cz aap alfaz ka sahara hi lete hen ......

G janab me na tu aap jese sha'iron se ghabrata hoon or na he aap jeson k in ulte seedhe alfaaz se,
Kiyun k naaz hy mujhay apne usatzaa pe,
bai rehi alfaaz ka sehara lene ki baat tu is sehare k bagher tu maan bhi beche ko doodh nhi deti agar becha alfaaz ka sehara na le tu,
aapko ek dostana or bradrana mashwara yehi doonga k apni shairi kisi kabil ustad ko dikhayen phir aapko pta chalega jub wo udherhega or aap jese sha'iron k deewan me se ek shair bhi esa nhi nikalta jisay shair keha ja sakay, alfaaz ka sehara tu aap lete hain aapki shairi me alfaaz k ilawa or kia ???
& 4 yo kind & kind info me abhi khud ko tanqeed kerne k kabil nhi samajhta,
sirf me ne ek mashwara dia tha k mujhay esa laga bussss,,,,
or me ne kia kiya ???
or aap masha ALLAH khud ko teepoo sultan samajhne lag gaye,
aapne ek choti C raye ko isue bna liya....
haalaan k aap piar se bhi mujhay keh sakte thy k aap hamari discuss se door rehain,
hatt dharmi isi ko ehte hain bhai jaan
aap khud apni Poetry ko sirf defend kr sakte hain us ki islaah nhi,
tu aap pehle ksii teacher se miliye phir aa k yehaan roab jharhiyegaa,
understood ???:salam: