"Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Aadaab!!


friends ek mushkil mein daal rahay hain aap sab ko .......:embarasse lekin humein is ghazal ki zarurat hay ......aur problem ye hay k humein ghazal ka sirf ek last ya shayad Second last Sh'r yaad hay...Aur SHAYAR ka naam bhi maloom nahin :pagal:


Sh'r ye hay


"Mohabbat Khel Hay To AAo Khelein
Magar Saathi Badalnay Ki Nahin Hay"


chalieey ji ab jaldee se sab apni khidmaat pesh kijieey jis kisi k pass bhi hay ye Ghazal foren se pehlay yahan post kijieey

[Z.]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Aadaab!!


friends ek mushkil mein daal rahay hain aap sab ko .......:embarasse lekin humein is ghazal ki zarurat hay ......aur problem ye hay k humein ghazal ka sirf ek last ya shayad Second last Sh'r yaad hay...Aur SHAYAR ka naam bhi maloom nahin :pagal:


Sh'r ye hay


"Mohabbat Khel Hay To AAo Khelein
Magar Saathi Badalnay Ki Nahin Hay"


chalieey ji ab jaldee se sab apni khidmaat pesh kijieey jis kisi k pass bhi hay ye Ghazal foren se pehlay yahan post kijieey

walaikum Adaab :D

apni khidmat to nahi albata apney aap ko peysh kiye deytey hein ::khi:

Sorry Eesha, mey sha'iri sey itna gehra Zauq rakhti to zaroor ye ghazal jhat paT suna deyti :D

btw Aap kahein to mey khudi iss ghazal ko mukammal ker dun

:hehe:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

walaikum Adaab :D

apni khidmat to nahi albata apney aap ko peysh kiye deytey hein ::khi:

Sorry Eesha, mey sha'iri sey itna gehra Zauq rakhti to zaroor ye ghazal jhat paT suna deyti :D

btw Aap kahein to mey khudi iss ghazal ko mukammal ker dun

:hehe:

Jeeti rahieey :hehe:

:kr: :kr: humein mukammal ghazal chahieey
ghazal ya shayar ka sadmay se khaatma nahin kerwana humein jo aapko mukammal kernay ko kahein hum :hehe:

[Z.]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Jeeti rahieey :hehe:

:kr: :kr: humein mukammal ghazal chahieey
ghazal ya shayar ka sadmay se khaatma nahin kerwana humein jo aapko mukammal kernay ko kahein hum :hehe:

:lol
agar Sha'ir Hayaat hain to phir mey khud bhi ye jasarat nahi karun gi :khi:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

:lol
agar Sha'ir Hayaat hain to phir mey khud bhi ye jasarat nahi karun gi :khi:

aure agar naheen hain to bhi humaree sare humdardiyan Shayar k saath hain :hehe:

[Z.]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

aure agar naheen hain to bhi humaree sare humdardiyan Shayar k saath hain :hehe:

Kyun Esha :lol

mey bhi thori si apney taur wali sha'iri ker leyti hun ;)


btw Pegham key itney ziada Sha'irana ZauQ waley logon ney abhi tak aap ki help kyun nahi ki

:khi:

[neha_ahmad]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

uno to shaeri say kuch mohabat humain bhi hay but kisa kuch uno hay k ea nuzam ya guzal mari bhi nuzer say nahi guzri ,wasay kun na kheal main koi naya sathi dhond lo jo kissi ap ki nuzam ko pora kur day

[Soulmate]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Mujhe ye tu nehi pata ke ye Ghazal kon si hai
Agar ap hukam karein tu mein aik Ghazal apni taraf se likhe deta hoon aur ye sher us mein fit kar daite hain
Bataein kaisa laga mera Idea
Aakhir kaar mein hoon na ............... ?

[*Rida*]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Aadaab!!


friends ek mushkil mein daal rahay hain aap sab ko .......:embarasse lekin humein is ghazal ki zarurat hay ......aur problem ye hay k humein ghazal ka sirf ek last ya shayad Second last Sh'r yaad hay...Aur SHAYAR ka naam bhi maloom nahin :pagal:


Sh'r ye hay


"Mohabbat Khel Hay To AAo Khelein
Magar Saathi Badalnay Ki Nahin Hay"


chalieey ji ab jaldee se sab apni khidmaat pesh kijieey jis kisi k pass bhi hay ye Ghazal foren se pehlay yahan post kijieey

Tasleemat
shair buht zabardast hai....tu ghazal bhi la jawab hogi....:rose
koshish kartay hain talash karnay ki:)

[sccorpion81]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Jeeti Rahiey

Wallah main nay yeh ghazal her giz nahien likhi:donno:


Laikin Yeh shair meri nazar say kahien guzar chuka hai

aap nay hukam diya hai tu dhoondna tu peray ga hi:embarasse

[*Rida*]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

koshish ki thi.....sirf yehi shair mila aur ghazal filhaal ....

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Kyun Esha :lol

mey bhi thori si apney taur wali sha'iri ker leyti hun ;)


btw Pegham key itney ziada Sha'irana ZauQ waley logon ney abhi tak aap ki help kyun nahi ki

:khi:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Mujhe ye tu nehi pata ke ye Ghazal kon si hai
Agar ap hukam karein tu mein aik Ghazal apni taraf se likhe deta hoon aur ye sher us mein fit kar daite hain
Bataein kaisa laga mera Idea
Aakhir kaar mein hoon na ............... ?

nhee hum hukum nahee sirf request kertay hain k please aap ye zulm mat kijieey ga...
Shuara ki rooh kaanp uthay gee aapki shayree perh k :zuban:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Tasleemat
shair buht zabardast hai....tu ghazal bhi la jawab hogi....:rose
koshish kartay hain talash karnay ki:)

haana dear boht zaberdast ghazal hay
lekin :tauba humein bilkul bhi nahin mil rahee kaheen se bhi nhin

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: "Aik Ghazal Chahieey"

Jeeti Rahiey

Wallah main nay yeh ghazal her giz nahien likhi:donno:

kion nahin likhi likhi hoty aap nay ger ye ghazal to humein itni prb to na hoty na :a stick:

Laikin Yeh shair meri nazar say kahien guzar chuka hai

nazar se guzarnay ko naheen kaha humnay humein ghazal chahieey , wo bhi pori ki pori

aap nay hukam diya hai tu dhoondna tu peray ga hi:embarasse

to phir jaldee se dhoondieey