Aik Kooshish

[sidra tulmuntaha]

Asalam o alaikum

kuch time pehlay hi shayri suru ki hey
or PEGHAM may or aik du jagha pe send ki hey
aap k comments hi bata saktay hain k may kesa likhti ho

aik kooshish jo ki hey hum nay
agar sahi ho tu bata dijiye
agar ho gai koi galti to khafa na hoiye
k is shayri ki is mehfil may hain hum naey naey

thanks

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Aik Kooshish

InshaALLAH you will be great Poet....
and wellcome here

[sidra tulmuntaha]

Re: Aik Kooshish

Thanksssssssss:):):)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Aik Kooshish

Again welcome

[Yaaram]

Re: Aik Kooshish

Welcome on Pegham :) InshAllah u will be great poet :rose

[MuQadas]

Re: Aik Kooshish

best of luck sidra