Kaya wajah hai???????

[shakeeel]

Alsalamo alaikum Friends.
Designed poetry mein Farhat abbas shah ki ek Nazam "Mohabbat chup nahin rehti" pesh ki ja rahi hai. mein is nazam ko bohat mehnat se bana raha hun lekin mujhe yeh dekh ka bohat mayoosi hui hai k is par bohat kam logon ne apni raye ka izhar kiya hai. Aap sab doston se guzarish hai k agar yeh nazam aap ko pasand na bhi aaye to bhi apni raye ka izhar to karen.
1.... Kaya yeh nazam achi nahin hai...?
2.....kaya is ki composing aur presentation achi nahin hai...?
3.....Ya phir meri abhi aap logon se itni dosti hi nahin ho saki , ke is ko pazeerai milti....?

meri pegham k sab members se request hai k mujh ko wajah zaroor bataen.
aap ki bohat mashkoor hun ga.
Kush rahiye Aabad rahiye.


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[Yaaram]

Re: Kaya wajah hai???????

Shakeel bhai Pareshan na hoye :) Aap is ko complete to kar lein :) phir InshAllah Comments bhi mil jayein ge :)

[Admin]

Re: Kaya wajah hai???????

Shakeel bhai main is intizaar mein hoon keh aap ka shahkar mukamil ho jaey to main members ko PM/email karoon - lekin I think it's better keh members ko saath hi saath btatey jaein - so I have sent email notification about it.

Aap fiker na karein inshaAllah is per zaroor baat ho gi :)