Ik Larki

[hayaa_n]

Punjaabi vich likhaan di koshish kitti hay..:D

Mairay andro'n
Ik kalli larki rondi aiy
Jehda chera hasda aiy
Jehdya'n akha'n pijdya'n nai'n
O chup chup jai rendi aiy
Man e man wich boldi aiy
Sarya'n de chehrey khojdi aiy
Kinni pagal larki aiy....

(Háya)

Adnan ji main Adit kar ditti aiy.bouhti shukriya...

[Yaaram]

Re: Ik Larki

sayi kar dewaN thori jayi
Merey AndroN
Ik kalli larki rondi rendi aay
jehda chera hasda aay
4 line ki samjh nahi aa rhai kya likha hay
O chup chup jai rendi aay
man e man wich boldi aay
saryan de chehrey khojdi aay
kinni pagal larki aay

[Yaaram]

Re: Ik Larki

baqi kamal likhe jay......silsila chadna nai changa......

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ik Larki

baqi kamal likhe jay......silsila chadna nai changa......

Adnan Ji 4th line ko main urdu main likhti hun aap us ko punjabi main likhiye sahi kar kay insha Allah koshish jaari rakhun gi..:)

Jis ki aankhain bheegti hain....4th line

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ik Larki

sayi kar dewaN thori jayi
Merey AndroN
Ik kalli larki rondi rendi aay
jehda chera hasda aay
4 line ki samjh nahi aa rhai kya likha hay
O chup chup jai rendi aay
man e man wich boldi aay
saryan de chehrey khojdi aay
kinni pagal larki aay

Adnan ji bouhati shukriya k tusi ainu sahi kar ditta.mainu punjavi wich vi likhan da showq tay aiy par mainu aaundi nai aiy.Insha Allah koshish jaari rakhaan gi.bouhti shukriya.:)

[khan]

Re: Ik Larki

AOA,

Main b sahyi karta lakin panjabi nain ati na ji:)


Sohail Abbasi.

[Rabi]

Re: Ik Larki

hayaa nay likha yakeenan accha ho ga mughy bas thori thori si samgh ayi :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ik Larki

AOA,

Main b sahyi karta lakin panjabi nain ati na ji:)


Sohail Abbasi.

W.salaam
Khan ji tusi parh litta aiy vi kamaal kitta :lol inna vi bouhti aiy..SAHI karan waastay Adnan ji itthay mowjud nay tay o hi karday vi nay....:masha :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ik Larki

hayaa nay likha yakeenan accha ho ga mughy bas thori thori si samgh ayi :)

Rabi ki gall aiy tuwadi :thmbup: sirf sada naa waikh k changa likhnay di stamp la chaddi aiy:lol .main hamaisha tay changa likh vi nai sakdi huni tay aiy paihli koshish kitti aiy punjabi vich.Insha Allah likhdi rahwan gi...Adnan ji nu bas thoura mainu sikhaan di zaroort aiy.:cc: shayed sikh jaawan.:)