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    tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge...
    meri jind di gal na kerya kero
    mein har thaan....vasdi rehni aan...
    mery hanjoo koi na vekhey dhola..
    merey haasey dunyaa gaandi aie...
    menoon kion chup chaap hi chadyaa aie...
    meri hasti ton inni bezaari vi kion....
    mera deen mazhab...eeman..miley....
    te akhaan sab noon kehndyaan ne....
    menoon yaad tuwadi aandi aie...
    fer hor na koi saah aawey...
    fer hor na koi raah miley....
    fer dunya badlan lagdi aie...
    tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge...
    meri jind da koi sawal nahen...
    aie jindrri nemaani kamli aie....


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    Last edited by Aania; 1 November 2005, 05:20.
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  • #2
    Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

    i dono much punjabi..bas pata nahen kia likh diya....:( lolzzz...bardasht keejye :) :bhago:
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    • #3
      Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

      Asslam-o_Alikum WR WB

      Bhot umda ...... aur bhot hi pyari kosish ki hy ...... Well Honestly main ya to nhi jnti ky Shiri ky adab -o-ahtram kya hy ... aur Infact i cant speak Panjabi too ... but jitna parha hy us ky lhaaz sey bhot enjoy kya aur maza aya .....

      Asa likhty rahya . takay aap ki aur meri Panjabi Zuban to kum sey kum sahi ho :)

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      • #4
        Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

        Originally posted by Bheegi-Palkain
        Asslam-o_Alikum WR WB

        Bhot umda ...... aur bhot hi pyari kosish ki hy ...... Well Honestly main ya to nhi jnti ky Shiri ky adab -o-ahtram kya hy ... aur Infact i cant speak Panjabi too ... but jitna parha hy us ky lhaaz sey bhot enjoy kya aur maza aya .....

        Asa likhty rahya . takay aap ki aur meri Panjabi Zuban to kum sey kum sahi ho :)

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        aap girly ho ke boyee??? i m confused sorry.... :tauba

        o yea....i luv punjabi naa....to bear me ....:embarasse
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        • #5
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          wowwwwwww Aania. urdu aap ko likhni (i mean inpage:) )aati nhi mugar punjabi vich sach pucho tay tusi ghazab hi ker dita aeh, mazaq tu alawah keh rhi aan, really zaberdast likha hey aap ne, itni achi punjabi to mujhey v nhi aati.:)

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          • #6
            Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

            Originally posted by Muskan
            wowwwwwww Aania. urdu aap ko likhni (i mean inpage:) )aati nhi mugar punjabi vich sach pucho tay tusi ghazab hi ker dita aeh, mazaq tu alawah keh rhi aan, really zaberdast likha hey aap ne, itni achi punjabi to mujhey v nhi aati.:)
            hehe lolz..... naaa???? hehehehe :cc:
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            • #7
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              Arey Wah ............ :masha buhut acha likha hai .......... mujhe nai pata tha tum itni achi punjabi bhi likh sakti ho .

              Keep it up dear :thmbup:
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              • #8
                Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

                very nice aania keep it up

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                • #9
                  Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

                  Urdu, English.... tay hun punjabi vi..

                  oye tussi kahin jin tay nayee ? /bhago

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                  • #10
                    Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

                    Zabardast aani - bohat changa likhiye aey, lafzaan da istimaal tey biyaan karan da andaaz bohat changa laga aey tey jaan key khushi hoee aey keh tusi punjabi vich vi apni sochaan jo alfaaz da jama pehna sakdey o... Very nice ji :)
                    tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujhey
                    tumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lagey

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                    • #11
                      Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

                      Originally posted by Saima Shaheen
                      Arey Wah ............ :masha buhut acha likha hai .......... mujhe nai pata tha tum itni achi punjabi bhi likh sakti ho .

                      Keep it up dear :thmbup:

                      ye achi hai ye to aap sab ke replies se pata chala ....

                      mujhey bas punjabi aiesee hi aati hai.....:embarasse
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                      • #12
                        Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

                        Originally posted by KHL
                        very nice aania keep it up
                        r u sure??????? lolz....:kr:
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                        • #13
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                          Originally posted by Aik Lamha
                          Urdu, English.... tay hun punjabi vi..

                          oye tussi kahin jin tay nayee ? /bhago

                          O ji tusi howo ge naa jin....asi te vampire hi ho sakney aaan.... :kr:
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                          • #14
                            Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

                            Originally posted by Masood
                            Zabardast aani - bohat changa likhiye aey, lafzaan da istimaal tey biyaan karan da andaaz bohat changa laga aey tey jaan key khushi hoee aey keh tusi punjabi vich vi apni sochaan jo alfaaz da jama pehna sakdey o... Very nice ji :)

                            well ji tusi zara kadi kadi sahayeta ker dawo....te koshish jaari rahey gi punjabi vi likhan di....te naaley gilaa keraan ...jaan deyo fer sahi.... :cc::rose
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                            • #15
                              Re: tusi hor ki bhed chupao ge..

                              Originally posted by Aania
                              O ji tusi howo ge naa jin....asi te vampire hi ho sakney aaan.... :kr:
                              tussi vampire ho? /bhago

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