Safar Zindagi Da....

[Mr.Khan]

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Translation

Safar Zindagi ka...

Safar zindagi ka khatam ho jana hai,
Sooyen ge hum phir uthana nahi,
Oodh len ge phir safaid chadar hum,
Kisi ko pooche bina chal den ge hum,
Na rooke ga koi jaate hue hum ko,
Aur kisi ke rookay hum ko rukna nahi,
Chaar dino ka hoga maatam bus,
Phir to hamara naam kisi ne pochna tuk nahi,

[ε�з � ΰ T T Є ŗ f Ł � ε�з]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

mene perhne ki koshish tou ki ... :)

2nd last line ka matlab bata do plz

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

mene perhne ki koshish tou ki ... :)

2nd last line ka matlab bata do plz

soote hue agar hum mile to hume uthana mat :)

[GumShuda]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

mene perhne ki koshish tou ki ... :)

2nd last line ka matlab bata do plz

soote hue agar hum mile to hume uthana mat :)

"Chaar din di paini hai Raam Rooli "

I think yeh wali 2nd last line hai

Es ka matlab hai kah , sirf chaar din ki raam kahani hai aur chaar din kay lye hi es ka Shoor rahay ga , matlab chaar din baad zindagi ka shoor khatam ho jata hai. Rooli ( Roola ) means Shoor ya Charcha hona kisi cheez ka.

Yeh bohat Gehri poetry hai mein eski tashree'h kardoon ga inshAllah
@Mr.Khan
Khan bhai yeh jo apne tashreh ki hai na lolsss yeh sahi nahi hai sorry to say par lagta hai apko punjabi kay saath english bhi nahi ati :D kidding
Es ka matlab hai sahi se :D

Safa Zindagi da jadoo Muk jana
Sute pai nai aisi fir Uthna nahi

Jab Zindagi ka safar khatam ho jai ga ,ya jab mout aa jai gi tu phir mein soo raha hoon ga aur sota hi rahoon ga hamaisha kay lye, kabbhi uthoo'n ga nahi.

Barhaal nice sharing i luv it :D

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

"Chaar din di paini hai Raam Rooli "

I think yeh wali 2nd last line hai

Es ka matlab hai kah , sirf chaar din ki raam kahani hai aur chaar din kay lye hi es ka Shoor rahay ga , matlab chaar din baad zindagi ka shoor khatam ho jata hai. Rooli ( Roola ) means Shoor ya Charcha hona kisi cheez ka.

Yeh bohat Gehri poetry hai mein eski tashree'h kardoon ga inshAllah
@Mr.Khan
Khan bhai yeh jo apne tashreh ki hai na lolsss yeh sahi nahi hai sorry to say par lagta hai apko punjabi kay saath english bhi nahi ati :D kidding
Es ka matlab hai sahi se :D

Safa Zindagi da jadoo Muk jana
Sute pai nai aisi fir Uthna nahi

Jab Zindagi ka safar khatam ho jai ga ,ya jab mout aa jai gi tu phir mein soo raha hoon ga aur sota hi rahoon ga hamaisha kay lye, kabbhi uthoo'n ga nahi.

Barhaal nice sharing i luv it :D

Yaar actually parhne me mishhhhtake ho gaii thi :D, mai 2nd line samjha tha :khi:, BTW me ko punjabi nahi aati but shair-o-shyri se lagaoo hai is lye ye poetry mujhy achi lagi to mai ne share kar di aap logon k saath, & i m really thankful to u that u summarized the 2nd last line , & I will wait for the whole summary of that Poem :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

wadya

[GumShuda]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

Yaar actually parhne me mishhhhtake ho gaii thi :D, mai 2nd line samjha tha :khi:, BTW me ko punjabi nahi aati but shair-o-shyri se lagaoo hai is lye ye poetry mujhy achi lagi to mai ne share kar di aap logon k saath, & i m really thankful to u that u summarized the 2nd last line , & I will wait for the whole summary of that Poem :)

Koi baat nahi baray baray forums pe aisi chothi chothi mishtakes hoti rahti hain nvm :D
ap ko Punjabi nahi ati tu aa jai gi inshAllah :D
Bohat achi shairi share kartay ho ap (Y)
u r welcome :) , inshAllah mein jaldi hi koshish karoon ga es sari ki tashre'h karnay abhi kuch aur kaam bhi pending hain aur garmi and x-mas ne hi mat mari howi hai :D

[ε�з � ΰ T T Є ŗ f Ł � ε�з]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

yeh tou mere samjh mai agaya tha janab :) ap samjhe nahi bhai mene ap ko second last line kahi hay:tauba

soote hue agar hum mile to hume uthana mat :)

[ε�з � ΰ T T Є ŗ f Ł � ε�з]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

aww correct ....
yehi line thii... :)

thanko chishmish..apne meko bohat acha samjhaya...pori poetry samjha den pleeeej :phool:

"Chaar din di paini hai Raam Rooli "

I think yeh wali 2nd last line hai

Es ka matlab hai kah , sirf chaar din ki raam kahani hai aur chaar din kay lye hi es ka Shoor rahay ga , matlab chaar din baad zindagi ka shoor khatam ho jata hai. Rooli ( Roola ) means Shoor ya Charcha hona kisi cheez ka.

Yeh bohat Gehri poetry hai mein eski tashree'h kardoon ga inshAllah
@Mr.Khan
Khan bhai yeh jo apne tashreh ki hai na lolsss yeh sahi nahi hai sorry to say par lagta hai apko punjabi kay saath english bhi nahi ati :D kidding
Es ka matlab hai sahi se :D

Safa Zindagi da jadoo Muk jana
Sute pai nai aisi fir Uthna nahi

Jab Zindagi ka safar khatam ho jai ga ,ya jab mout aa jai gi tu phir mein soo raha hoon ga aur sota hi rahoon ga hamaisha kay lye, kabbhi uthoo'n ga nahi.

Barhaal nice sharing i luv it :D

[farish]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

Koi translate karay ga please :s

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

wah wah ki poem lhiki aaa...wah ji wah...

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

wah wah ki poem lhiki aaa...wah ji wah...

Shukran bibi :)

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

Koi translate karay ga please :s

Ye lijye janab Translation :)

Safar zindagi ka khatam ho jana hai,
Sooyen ge hum phir uthana nahi,
Oodh len ge phir safaid chadar hum,
Kisi ko pooche bina chal den ge hum,
Na rooke ga koi jaate hue hum ko,
Aur kisi ke rookay hum ko rukna nahi,
Chaar dino ka hoga maatam bus,
Phir to hamara naam kisi ne pochna tuk nahi,

[GumShuda]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

Ye lijye janab Translation :)

Safar zindagi ka khatam ho jana hai,
Sooyen ge hum phir uthana nahi,
Oodh len ge phir safaid chadar hum,
Kisi ko pooche bina chal den ge hum,
Na rooke ga koi jaate hue hum ko,
Aur kisi ke rookay hum ko rukna nahi,
Chaar dino ka hoga maatam bus,

Phir to hamara naam kisi ne pochna tuk nahi,

Nice , chalo ji ab humain tashre'h nai karni paray gi :kr:
thanks Khan bhai :)

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Safar Zindagi Da....

Nice , chalo ji ab humain tashre'h nai karni paray gi :kr:
thanks Khan bhai :)

U r welcome :lpop: