Sajnaa !

[Gul]

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Han ji yeh asaan punjabi hai :D
pasand karan da shukaria.
aho meri shairi hi hay, kuyn lagdi nai :P :D

Hai tey Vadiya....par ,....!

Wesay sachi aaNkhaaN tey mehnoo taaa-day kehn tay V yaqeen nai Aaandaa k aai taaadi apni Sha-errii aay......sachi sachi das diO nahi tay .................!!!!!!!!

[Yaaram]

Re: Sajnaa !

gul Aapa aik acha likhne wale ke lye yahi barey aizaaz ki baat hoti hay ke koi manta nahi ke yeh us ki kaavish hay :)

[Gul]

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hunn tussi onaah dheee Sayd leyn lag pay O

[GumShuda]

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Hai tey Vadiya....par ,....!

Wesay sachi aaNkhaaN tey mehnoo taaa-day kehn tay V yaqeen nai Aaandaa k aai taaadi apni Sha-errii aay......sachi sachi das diO nahi tay .................!!!!!!!!

Adaab.
Jee mein ne hi likhi hai Alhamdulillah ,aur jis din likhi thi os din hi post kar di thi.
Apko yaqeen kuyn nahi aa raha ??? :S
okay mein jab eska next version likhon ga phir apko yaqeen aa jai ga inshAllah :) .
Ya phir yeh bata dain apko yaqeen kaisay aye ga ? :S

[Gul]

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ummm.. as I think I expect MORE BETTER FROM U :):P

[GumShuda]

Re: Sajnaa !

ummm.. as I think I expect MORE BETTER FROM U :):P

lolsss, han es mein kuch khamiya'n hain lekin mein itna acha shair nahi hoon :D
yeh daikhain zara :$
http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?p=608753#post608753

[GumShuda]

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Bohat wadhiya likhday ho ...Apna kalam share karday rya karo

Bohat mehrbaani malanga , inshAllah karda rawaa'n da :d

[Soulmate]

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wow nice

[GumShuda]

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wow nice

bohat bohat shukaria tuwad pai jaan :D

[~Åŋğë£~]

Re: Sajnaa !

mere samjh nahi ara plz ap urdu mai bhi translate kia keren ta k sab loug samjh saken

[GumShuda]

Re: Sajnaa !

mere samjh nahi ara plz ap urdu mai bhi translate kia keren ta k sab loug samjh saken

ji zaroor, mein koshish karoo'n ga ... Mein URDU mein likh kay bi upload kar doon ga jald hi.

[Z.]

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ji zaroor, mein koshish karoo'n ga ... Mein URDU mein likh kay bi upload kar doon ga jald hi.

phir inshAllah tabhi perheiN gey ..... abhi to sab sir key uper sey guzar gaya hai :D

[GumShuda]

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phir inshAllah tabhi perheiN gey ..... abhi to sab sir key uper sey guzar gaya hai :D

:D
ser kay neechay se bhi guzrata tu samajh nahi ani thi coz khaali ser kay oper se ghuzray ya neechay se ek hi baat hai :kr: :P
Han inshAllah koshish karta warna phir kisi aur se kah daita hoon wo urdu mein likh dai ga .

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

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buhat he vadiya lhika tusi..khush raho..

[GumShuda]

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buhat he vadiya lhika tusi..khush raho..

tuwada shukaria , tusein vi khush rawo :)