Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

[WOH LARKI]

[Masood]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

Hanjoo, hawaan tey ruswaiyaan
taqdeer vich tanhaiyaan
ki dassan main, kuriyaan
ki, ki naseeb naal leyayaan



Muskan ji gal tey tussi cha-misri keeti aey, par ehdey vich aik aalam di haqeeqat byaan kar ditti aey. Kuriyaan is sari gallan to wadh key merey sohney Rabb da ik bohat waddah inaam tey bakhsheesh vi hondiyaan ney. Bo'oun changa likhiyaa tusi :rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

Muskan sis....... mei pujabi buhut achi nahi likh sakti is liyeh urdu mei reply hoon. Aap ne buhut acha aur buhut sach likha hai .... Lerkio ki taqdeer likhtey waqt janey khuda aisi kiu likh deta hai :( .

[khan]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

AOA,


Ki gal kiti wah bilkol sachi te khari :)


Sohail Abbasi.

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

aslaam_u_alikam

waah muskan ji dil ko cho leney waalii tehreer pesh ki hey aap ney bohat shukriya

[WorThless]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

Jey aap likhi jay tey kamal ee likhi jey jeeyuindey rawo :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

wow zabrdast muskaan bohat achi sharing ki hai aapne aap ki taraf se mazeed punjabi ki achi achi nazms aru ghazals ka wait karrein ge shukrya :)

[WOH LARKI]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

wow zabrdast muskaan bohat achi sharing ki hai aapne aap ki taraf se mazeed punjabi ki achi achi nazms aru ghazals ka wait karrein ge shukrya :)

Khan, Fatima, Forumadmin aur Yaaram aap sub ak boht shukriya:rose .

Aur Yaaram mein punjabi m ghazal likhoon?ho hi nhi sakta, boht mushkil kaam hey sachii. Han mazeed nazmein likhnay ki koshish karoon gi.:)

[Say_lani]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

Asslamo Alaikum muskaan
mai paili wari tuad ais Makhfil wich shirkat kitti aye.Tay sach bara maza aria aye.Apni zuban bao mitthi lagdi aye.
tay tussan bara sohna kalam sanu sunaya..bas Das diyo k aye tuaddi apni zati kawish ya hor kisay sha_ir di
Saylani

[hayaa_n]

Re: Kuriyan Di Taqdeer

Muskan ji.. mukhtasir tay bouhat umda soch di haamil tuadi aiy nazm aiy.jiday wich bohti hassaas jiya pegham tusi ditta aiy..:)