It is raining again

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: It is raining again

wah ustaad...ajj u ne ustaad hone ka aik saboot to de dia:garmi:
u ne to mera sir fakhar se bhi buland kar dia

[*Rida*]

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*I WROTE IT 7, 8 YEARS AGO. BY CHANCE I FOUND IT IN MY OLD DATA, SO PLEASED TO SHARE IT WITH YOU.

u really did a brilliant job and EXPRESSED heartfelt sentiments in an excellent way.....
a touchy piece of writing conveying the tale of immortal love....
i remeber a quote the tragedy of love is to love someone who used to love u .........

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: It is raining again

me roo'n gii...u ko kya hai...

Aik to tum saadi achi nahi lagti aur ouper se roo ke me ko daranay ki nakaam kooshish bhi ker rahi ho

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: It is raining again

wah ustaad...ajj u ne ustaad hone ka aik saboot to de dia:garmi:
u ne to mera sir fakhar se bhi buland kar dia

Mein tumhari sur'bulandi ke liye sharing kerta rahoon ga mere bablu :hairdrayer:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: It is raining again

u really did a brilliant job and EXPRESSED heartfelt sentiments in an excellent way.....
a touchy piece of writing conveying the tale of immortal love....
i remember a quote the tragedy of love is to love someone who used to love u .........

I am happy that you commented. It was a small effort to create fantasy tale atmosphere to show power and intensity of "immortal love". Somewhere I read, "when love is not madness, it is not love" :bwink:

Thank you again :salam:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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O My God , Amiri is this you ?:jc:
Honestly its marvellous , very heart touching:rose. and still I'm not believing tht its written by you

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: It is raining again

O My God , Amiri is this you ?:jc:
Honestly its marvellous , very heart touching:rose. and still I'm not believing tht its written by you

eeshiye....waikh lay fair toon aapni vaari yakeen nai na kerdi, theek aye mein v teri aye bewafai nai pulni

Yeh to mein ne tub likhi thi jub mein bucha tha. Ub likhoon ga to kia sitam dhaoon ga, kabi soocha tum ne :hairdrayer:

[jia]

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Very nice...superb sharing:rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Very nice...superb sharing:rose

Oye toon kithoon aa gai ainay dinaa de baad lasooriye :shyy:

[*Hala*]

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I liked alot,because it showed alot of good emotions! :shyy:
Munda ji! it had anice flow and you did an exellent job at capuring both the ups and downs to love :)

you are a good writer keep up the good work:thmbup:

be happy

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: It is raining again

wow.................lakin likha kia hay

[*Hala*]

Re: It is raining again

wow.................lakin likha kia hay

buht kuch... app phely pher to lejye.

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: It is raining again

I liked alot,because it showed alot of good emotions! :shyy:
Munda ji! it had anice flow and you did an exellent job at capuring both the ups and downs to love :)

you are a good writer keep up the good work:thmbup:

be happy

Oh Hala Jani it is nothing but your sweetness :shyy:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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wow.................lakin likha kia hay

:lol such such bata, pagal khanay se baag ke aaya he na

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: It is raining again

buht kuch... app phely pher to lejye.

is ne perh ke phir poochna he ke likha kia he :lol