Stone

[Mr.Khan]

I wish I am a stone,

So, when the time comes that they want me out of their life

they can throw me as far as they could.

I may break into pieces,

But atleast I won't feel any Pain.

[*khushi*]

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[Pakiza]

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I wish I am a stone,

So, when the time comes that they want me out of their life

they can throw me as far as they could.

I may break into pieces,

But atleast I won't feel any Pain.

I don't wish to be a stone

so when the time comes that anyone wants me out of their lives

i can walk away myself as far as i can

i will feel a lot of pain

but i may not break into pieces

to come back again when they need me


nice sharing Mr.Khan :thmbup:

[*Hala*]

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to come back again when they need me

[BANJARAH]

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i don't wish to be a stone

so when the time comes that anyone wants me out of their lives

i can walk away myself as far as i can

i will feel a lot of pain

but i may not break into pieces

to come back again when they need me


nice sharing mr.khan :thmbup:

bohat hi khoob!

Bless you always!

[thefire1]

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Assalaam-O-alaikum

Thank you Mr. Khan for sharing this poem and Thank you PAKIZA for altering the poem and posting your great comments, I would like to post my comments too I hope you will find it worth to read :)

I don't wish to be a stone

So when the time comes that anyone wants me out of their lives

They dont throw me out like a stone,

Rather I can walk away myself and hide myself from their sight

And will never come back until they plight

Though I will feel a lot of pain

But will consider it my gain

I will never break into pieces but be strong

Will always be around them but will not be long!!

[Pakiza]

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Assalaam-O-alaikum

Thank you Mr. Khan for sharing this poem and Thank you PAKIZA for altering the poem and posting your great comments, I would like to post my comments too I hope you will find it worth to read :)

I don't wish to be a stone

So when the time comes that anyone wants me out of their lives

They dont throw me out like a stone,

Rather I can walk away myself and hide myself from their sight

And will never come back until they plight

Though I will feel a lot of pain

But will consider it my gain

I will never break into pieces but be strong

Will always be around them but will not be long!!

great...felt nice to read a poetic form of my simple words....::thmbup::

[Nareem]

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well nyc

[thefire1]

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Thank you for your precious comments

great...felt nice to read a poetic form of my simple words....::thmbup::