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  • Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

    Assalaam Alaikum Friends:salam:


    Our



    Paradise Poem Competition



    is ended. Now time has come for voting the best entry.



    The last date of polling is 30th Oct 2009



    The entries are given below;




    Rabi's entry

    If I Adore You

    If I adore You out of fear of Hell, burn me in Hell!
    If I adore you out of desire for Paradise,
    Lock me out of Paradise.
    But if I adore you for Yourself alone,
    Do not deny to me Your eternal beauty.






    BadMan's entry

    Another night, another fight
    Series of arguments till daylight
    Tears shed, cruelty spoken
    Expectations reminded, promises broken
    It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
    It's just another day in my paradise

    Your words hurt my feelings
    Your anger weakens my soul
    They tear me up in pieces
    While I pretend to be whole
    Why do you do this to me
    I'm torn again, can't you see
    You crush me for no reason at all
    Somehow I manage to rise
    Then again you make me fall
    It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
    It's just another day in my paradise

    I cry out for help but no one cares
    I need a shoulder but no one is there
    Where did I go wrong I wonder sometimes
    Was loving you so much my only crime
    I try to be together, but I break down and cry
    Why do you keep breaking this broken heart of mine
    My feelings and my tears never matter to you
    You only do what you want to do
    It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
    It's just another day in my paradise

    Every time I think about setting myself free
    I think about the unknown that is waiting for me
    I picture my feet stepping outside of the door
    And I think there has to be something more
    A whole new world waits for me
    To give me a chance to be all I can be
    My bags are packed I'm ready to go
    Leaving behind what I once longed for
    It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
    It's just another day in my paradise

    Just as I set my mind this is what I'll do
    My innocent heart just runs back to you
    How can I leave, it's the only world I've known
    Though it's not my dream world,
    But it is what I call my own
    I cant set myself free even if I tried
    I'm a prisoner in my own paradise






    Mr.Khan's entry

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    Rida's entry

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    Best Of Luck
    13
    Rida
    46.15%
    6
    Rabi
    0.00%
    0
    BadMan
    38.46%
    5
    Mr.Khan
    15.38%
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  • #2
    Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

    و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله

    done....:thmbup:
    .......................!!!!!

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    • #3
      Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

      Walikumslam

      don3

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      • #4
        Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

        Walaikum Assalaam

        All the entries are best, everyone has done their best to present the best, however, since we have to select one, I have done so.

        May the best wins and all the best to all the participants.

        GOOD LUCK
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        • #5
          Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

          Voted

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          • #6
            Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

            Best of luck 2 all of u

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            • #7
              Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

              voted :lpop:
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              • #8
                Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

                Voted....
                u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

                :pr:

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                • #9
                  Re: Polling for Paradise Poem Competition

                  Voted to *Rida* chiips

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