~* Paradise Poem Competition ~ Oct 2009 *~

[Mr.Khan]

Assalaam Alaikum my dear friends :salam:

Hopefully that you all are fine by the grace of Almighty Allah :rose

In the month of October we are making a competition for you.

~* Paradise Poem Competition ~ Oct 2009 *~

You have to share a designed poem on Paradise or Eden.

Paradaise or Eden both have same meaning i.e. Jannat :)

Rules:

:) Everyone will share only one entry.

:) Edited entry will not be acceptable.

:) The last date of the competition is 25th Oct 2009

Best Of Luck my Dear Friends

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: ~* Paradise Poem Competition ~ Oct 2009 *~

i will try my best to share a poem

[crystal_thinking]

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Oo meray to papers start honay wlay hn... well men try krn ge...
thanx bro:rose

[*Rida*]

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Getting Jannah:rose :rose :rose

[*Hala*]

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:jazak:
excellent entry Rida jani...

[Rabi]

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If I Adore You

If I adore You out of fear of Hell, burn me in Hell!
If I adore you out of desire for Paradise,
Lock me out of Paradise.
But if I adore you for Yourself alone,
Do not deny to me Your eternal beauty.

[Soulmate]

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Another night, another fight
Series of arguments till daylight
Tears shed, cruelty spoken
Expectations reminded, promises broken
It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
It's just another day in my paradise

Your words hurt my feelings
Your anger weakens my soul
They tear me up in pieces
While I pretend to be whole
Why do you do this to me
I'm torn again, can't you see
You crush me for no reason at all
Somehow I manage to rise
Then again you make me fall
It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
It's just another day in my paradise

I cry out for help but no one cares
I need a shoulder but no one is there
Where did I go wrong I wonder sometimes
Was loving you so much my only crime
I try to be together, but I break down and cry
Why do you keep breaking this broken heart of mine
My feelings and my tears never matter to you
You only do what you want to do
It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
It's just another day in my paradise

Every time I think about setting myself free
I think about the unknown that is waiting for me
I picture my feet stepping outside of the door
And I think there has to be something more
A whole new world waits for me
To give me a chance to be all I can be
My bags are packed I'm ready to go
Leaving behind what I once longed for
It's nothing new; there is nothing to be surprised
It's just another day in my paradise

Just as I set my mind this is what I'll do
My innocent heart just runs back to you
How can I leave, it's the only world I've known
Though it's not my dream world,
But it is what I call my own
I cant set myself free even if I tried
I'm a prisoner in my own paradise

[*Hala*]

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beautiful sharing Rabi jani and Hamsafar ji

[Soulmate]

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beautiful sharing Rabi jani and Hamsafar ji

Thanks Hala :rose

[thefire1]

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Great sharing by RIDA, really loved it a true and clear message.
Sweet and simple entry by Rida
Geat shraing by HumSafar too, really deep in thought and sweet in words!

All the best to everyone, GOOD LUCK

[Mr.Khan]

Re: ~* Paradise Poem Competition ~ Oct 2009 *~

Great sharing by all competitors :thmbup:

[Mr.Khan]

~* Paradise Poem Competition ~ Oct 2009 *~

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