I Can See The Pain ............................

[*Hala*]

I Can See The Pain

I still see your face in my dreams
It hurts and it doesn't help at all
I still want you in my life as crazy as that seems
I want you to catch me when I fall

I still remember the first time we met
There was something so different about you
Your friendship was something I wanted to get
That smile when you said hi to me was so new

Out of no where you called me on the phone
I wanted to sit there and talk to you forever
You were so new, so crazy and unknown
I just knew that our friendship would never sever

Two years and we are barely holding it together
What happened to the way this all used to be
I never wanted you out of my like ever
I sat there for a long time pretending not to see

We decided to go out and make it all all right
It didn't work out of course we knew it couldn't
We couldn't even really stand each others sight
It shouldn't end this way but it did and I shouldn't

I miss you and everything you were to me
Ten years from now we will look back on it all
We will be older and finally be able to see
That love will stand the test of time and never fall

[*khushi*]

Re: I Can See The Pain ............................

B3autiful sharing d3...

[Nareem]

Re: I Can See The Pain ............................

Wow, v.v.v nice

[ChaMpioN PaKiStaNi]

Re: I Can See The Pain ............................

so nice sharing

[thefire1]

Re: I Can See The Pain ............................

very well phrased Hala jee... lovely arrangement of words, this poem is about friendship, about love and about pain..... all these necessary requirement of human.... every sincere heart should be filled with these qualities in order to qualify to be a loving and caring human being.... keep sharing your good thougths with us, khush rahyeh :)

[Mr.Khan]

Re: I Can See The Pain ............................

I Can See The Pain

I still see your face in my dreams
It hurts and it doesn't help at all
I still want you in my life as crazy as that seems
I want you to catch me when I fall

I miss you and everything you were to me
Ten years from now we will look back on it all
We will be older and finally be able to see

That love will stand the test of time and never fall

I can really see the pain through the eyes of ur wording :)

[pakgates]

Re: I Can See The Pain ............................

so beautiful and touching :)