Mistake ............................

[*Hala*]

Mistake
I must admit that I have often thought
of leaving it all behind and letting everything go

I was lost and alone, as I always am,
So many people around me,
Yet no one seems to care.

They say they understand and love me very much,
But just when I Trust to love, they forget and move on.

I held the knife so close
as tears, mixed with blood,
Began to fall slowly.
Like a foolish child I cried.

Knowing that I could end it all now
made my mind draw a blank.

I put the knife away and tried to wipe the blood,
that ran faster than I can describe.

I knew suicide wasn't the answer I was looking for.
I knew there was a reason for me being alone.

So many bad things happening at once -
They can make you forget
About the good qualities of life.

Even though life is hard,
and trouble an inevitable part of it.

If you decide to leave it all behind,
maybe you will,
but I can guarantee that others
Your Mistake will haunt ....

[*Rida*]

Re: Mistake ............................

:thmbup:

[Mr.Khan]

Re: Mistake ............................

Mistake

I must admit that I have often thought
of leaving it all behind and letting everything go

.

I knew suicide wasn't the answer I was looking for.
I knew there was a reason for me being alone.

So many bad things happening at once -
They can make you forget
About the good qualities of life.

Great sharing :rose

[thefire1]

Re: Mistake ............................

Lovely sharing Hala jee, its really an eye opener..... you have put all words in very well manner as well as message in each line is very clear. Its reflecting in our life and we should all learn from our MISTAKES.

If we follow a simple rule of learning something from our MISTAKES and do not repeat them, we can be a successful and a good human being.

Please keep sharing such wonderful posts with us in future too.

May ALLAH SWT light and guide our ways, AMEEN