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    The clouds move on,
    the earth turns grey;

    The happiness I felt,
    has quickly gone away;

    The whisper of the wind,
    seems to call my name;

    I try to respond,
    but it seems I'm not the same;

    Everything I see,
    and everything I feel;

    Sometimes seems like a dream,
    where nothing there is real;

    I grasp onto reality,
    and try to play this game;

    But every single thing,
    always remains the same;

    The mist is finally fading,
    the truth is here to stay;

    The illusions are finally passing,
    the lies have gone away;

    But reason cannot save me,
    tears will not heal;

    I've giving it some time,
    to see what will be revealed;

    No one has the answers,
    no one holds the key;

    I'm wishing for a miracle,
    that you'd belong to me;

    Until then,
    I'm lost with my solitude;

    Lost in this window,
    with no view.


    By Liz Waller

  • #2
    Re: Window with no view!!!

    Originally posted by Pakiza View Post
    The clouds move on,

    the earth turns grey;

    The happiness I felt,
    has quickly gone away;

    The whisper of the wind,
    seems to call my name;

    I try to respond,
    but it seems I'm not the same;

    Everything I see,
    and everything I feel;

    Sometimes seems like a dream,
    where nothing there is real;

    I grasp onto reality,
    and try to play this game;

    But every single thing,
    always remains the same;

    The mist is finally fading,
    the truth is here to stay;

    The illusions are finally passing,
    the lies have gone away;

    But reason cannot save me,
    tears will not heal;

    I've giving it some time,
    to see what will be revealed;

    No one has the answers,
    no one holds the key;

    I'm wishing for a miracle,
    that you'd belong to me;

    Until then,
    I'm lost with my solitude;

    Lost in this window,
    with no view.



    By Liz Waller
    Poem
    why don't u try this is competition

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    • #3
      Re: Window with no view!!!

      Originally posted by ZShan View Post
      Poem
      why don't u try this is competition
      coz I don't have the program for designing :donno:

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      • #4
        Re: Window with no view!!!

        I try to respond
        but it seemes i m not the same

        nice janabb
        really nice
        "Can you imagine what I would do if I could do all I can? "

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        • #5
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          • #6
            Re: Window with no view!!!

            very nice.

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            • #7
              Re: Window with no view!!!

              Pakiza infact i could not realize that what the poet was trying to describe......any way nice wordings as well as rhymes
              Last edited by Yaaram; 20 April 2008, 08:41.
              Allah

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              • #8
                Re: Window with no view!!!

                Nice poem Pakiza :rose

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                • #9
                  Re: Window with no view!!!

                  very nice g
                  :hii:

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                  • #10
                    Re: Window with no view!!!

                    thanks all

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