Rukhsar The Emerging Poet

[prince]

LOOK AT MY EXISTENCE , LOOK AT MY INSPIRAION,
LOOK AT YOUR COMELINESS, LOOK AT MY DESIRE,
MY ARROGANT EYES WANT TO LOOK YOU,
I HAVE NOT THE EYES OF MOSES ,
BUT YOU MAY GIVE VALUE TO THE EAGERNESS OF RUKHSAR.

these are the lines of a emerging young and beautiful poet Mr. Rukhsar the poet and advocate, of jandanwala , kharian. i hope all will enjoy his lines

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Rukhsar The Emerging Poet

welcome bro Rukhar here....u will find here road map for ur poetry...
one thing i wana tell here Rukhar is also my close friend he is emerging poet..
I have his writen poetry in my PC ...unfortunatly i couldnot upload here..inshaALLAH i will.

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Rukhsar The Emerging Poet

LOOK AT MY EXISTENCE , LOOK AT MY INSPIRAION,
LOOK AT YOUR COMILINESS, LOOK AT MY DESIRE,
MY ARROGANT EYES WANT TO LOOK YOU,
I HAVE NOT THE EYES OF MOSES ,
BUT YOU MAY GIVE VALUE TO THE EAGERNESS OF RUKHSAR.

these are the lines of a emerging young and beautiful poet Mr. Rukhsar the poet and advocate, of jandanwala , kharian. i hope all will enjoy his lines

I think the red highlighted word is wrong

It should be comeliness which means beauty...am i right?

[prince]

Re: Rukhsar The Emerging Poet

it was mistakenly done by me so u r right munda sialkoti
thanks for your attention