SunShine! (another one :$)

[Z.]

This is actually my first one and the second one "don't lose your way!" you ppl have already read....any comments are welcome :d

Sunshine O Sunshine
in the morning time
when singing birds
are praising God

Sunshine O Sunshine
in the midi time
when ppl are
rushing for work

Sunshine O sunshine
in the evening time
when blooming sunflowers
are bending with sadness...

fill me up with
strenght and light
so that
it make me live with Reality!!

by Xenya!

[Aania]

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

Very Nice .. Xeny .. Keep Writing ...
good luck!

[Z.]

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

Very Nice .. Xeny .. Keep Writing ...
good luck!

Shukran Aani,:rose

but m not that satisfied with the ending lines...any suggestions??

['SamRazi']

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

Superb siso .......... :em:

[Z.]

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

Superb siso .......... :em:

shukran :)

[*Rida*]

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

Sunshine O Sunshine
:hug:
enlightened Bloo's path of life

[Mr.Khan]

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

Nice one

[Z.]

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

thanks rida :rose

@Mr.khan

shukran

[Saira_abdul]

Re: SunShine! (another one :$)

cute