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  • #16
    Re: give me my blessing homes

    Originally posted by sumera View Post
    wow u r a poet and i was not aware

    lovely poetry:)

    keep sharing:thmbup:
    yes sumera sister i am a poet

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    • #17
      Re: magic beauty

      Originally posted by sensible View Post
      magic beauty

      eyes to eyes passing mail
      herbeauty talking fairy tale

      her eagle eyes catching birds
      and magic fingers dancing words

      she walks like a heaven girl
      when laughing feeling nightangale

      her face in night sparking moon
      and doing morning bright soon

      guese the one am talking who
      her words remind one or two

      her 'vala vala' lovely words
      hunting hearts and put in jail

      eyes to eyes passing mail
      her beauty talking fairy tale
      wow very nice sharing sensible

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      • #18
        Re: magic beauty

        Originally posted by naughty View Post
        wow very nice sharing sensible
        thank you naughty so much for ur encoragementthmbup:

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        • #19
          Re: ideal

          Originally posted by Mujahid Khan View Post
          some time i want to have two wings

          to fly for the house of my sweet dreams

          for the one who is waiting for me

          in the debth of my heart

          for the one where is my house

          in the debth of her heart

          on the way of her breath

          on the screen of her eyes

          and her eye remain infront of my eyes

          and i wish to go with her

          on the visit of the skies



          written by*******rehman mujahid
          great and very touching........thanks for sharing ur poem with us.......keep writing.....:)
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          • #20
            Re: ideal

            Originally posted by Wafa View Post
            great and very touching........thanks for sharing ur poem with us.......keep writing.....:)
            thank you so much wafa for the encoragement of my poetrythmbup:

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            • #21
              Re: give me my blessing homes

              Remarkable!! ...good to see your poems in this sec.

              keep writing and keep sharing with us :rose
              " Obstacles are what you see when you take your eyes off your goals "

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              • #22
                Re: give me my blessing homes

                Originally posted by bloo View Post
                Remarkable!! ...good to see your poems in this sec.

                keep writing and keep sharing with us :rose
                thanks siter for ur encouragementthmbup:

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                • #23
                  Re: give me my blessing homes

                  Originally posted by Mujahid Khan View Post



                  give me my blessing homes
                  adderess of the missing homes

                  mama papa floated blood
                  red in coulor looking mud
                  jungle deserts and the severs
                  blood is flowing even rivers
                  crying sisters wounded brothers
                  wounded brothers missing moms
                  give me my blessing homes
                  address of the missing homes

                  what you like let you take
                  ruling chair is ready pack
                  but childeren need a breath to live
                  and parients want alive back
                  then ruling chair is ready pack
                  you wanna peace in any zone
                  then why you are shelling bombs!
                  give me my blessing homes
                  address of the missing homes

                  my parients have advised me
                  they offten it revised me
                  close the door at bush
                  close the door at bush
                  close the door at bush if so!
                  his friendship offten suffer though
                  childerens many asking bush
                  why you are knocking homes?

                  Great Composition Mujahid bhai :thmbup:

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                  • #24
                    Re: give me my blessing homes

                    Originally posted by Mr.Khan View Post
                    Great Composition Mujahid bhai :thmbup:
                    thanks mr.khan for your encouragement:thmbup:

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                    • #25
                      Re: give me my blessing homes

                      nice work mr khan

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                      • #26
                        Re: give me my blessing homes

                        wow beautiful sharingzz

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