what did u do

[diyya_1980]

Have you ever felt alone in life,
Felt no one cared for you?
Or been out with a group of friends,
And felt alone then too?
Have you ever had a broken heart,
You felt couldn't be repaired?
Or tried to touch somebody with your words,
But knew nobody cared?
Have you ever needed good advice,
But were too afraid to call?
Or felt separated from the world,
Surrounded by a brick wall?
Have you ever been asked about your future,
And said you couldn't care less?
Or tried to pick up the pieces but,
They make just one giant mess?
Have you ever felt so confused,
That you couldn't even cry?
Have you ever felt so damn depressed;
Have you ever wished to die?
Then what did you do?!

dear reader plz leave yr comments

[Wafa]

Re: what did u do

no words to say..simply great ....i have gone through few of them....bt at that time what ever i feel suitable, i do that......:)

[diyya_1980]

Re: what did u do

no words to say..simply great ....i have gone through few of them....bt at that time what ever i feel suitable, i do that......:)

aoa,dear wafa,hope u re fine a bundle of thanx.act. ure da only one person who encourges me from the very first day i start writing 4 pegham n wen eva i share sum thing yr comments flowing me up like a hot baloon.n encourages me a lot.n especially realizes me bout da worth of my self written poetry
thanx
take care of yr self

[Wafa]

Re: what did u do

aoa,dear wafa,hope u re fine a bundle of thanx.act. ure da only one person who encourges me from the very first day i start writing 4 pegham n wen eva i share sum thing yr comments flowing me up like a hot baloon.n encourages me a lot.n especially realizes me bout da worth of my self written poetry
thanx
take care of yr self

walaikum salam diyya.....u r most welcome dear....i didn't knew u worte this poetry.......its really great...do write your name at the end of the poem......hope to see more from ur side.......take care....:phool:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: what did u do

Have you ever felt alone in life,
Felt no one cared for you?
Or been out with a group of friends,
And felt alone then too?
Have you ever had a broken heart,
You felt couldn't be repaired?
Or tried to touch somebody with your words,
But knew nobody cared?
Have you ever needed good advice,
But were too afraid to call?
Or felt separated from the world,
Surrounded by a brick wall?
Have you ever been asked about your future,
And said you couldn't care less?
Or tried to pick up the pieces but,
They make just one giant mess?
Have you ever felt so confused,
That you couldn't even cry?
Have you ever felt so damn depressed;
Have you ever wished to die?
Then what did you do?!

dear reader plz leave yr comments

everybody in his/her life come accross the these situations...life is not bed of roses...that is the part of life... but bouncing back from these hardships is the with courage is something which is worth praising:)

keep on sharing diya :thmbup: