Pieces Of Me

[NaQsh]

[*Hala*]

Re: Pieces Of Me

W.Salam :rose
haa!! thats soo nice ....i like it..... keep it up..be happy:rose

[NaQsh]

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thankyou for reading:)

[snobbish]

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Perhaps those thoughts are hard to resist,

Sometimes I wonder if I really exist!

For I die alone in every moment's bliss,

-And breathe once again; resurrected by life's kiss.



Whatever happened to happiness, I question!

Or was it just a figment of my imagination?



Whatever happened to love, I say!

Or was it just my heart led astray?

It is the only thing that I have always craved

Alas!! My dying soul cannot be saved...



As misery unfolds into a mystery;

I come undone into harsh reality,

Sacrifices undefined take their toll;

-Another chain...another poll,

Adding on to what I already hold.

Awsome !!!

Have you made these stunning meaningful stanza oneself or from some refernce....No big words to say just enivable and simply touching one's heart :)

Two thumd up !!!


I like the two ones which have coloured simply outstanding and meaningful close to the heart and life ....Reality !!!


God bless you and keep on


Regards

Snob

[NaQsh]

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Awsome !!!

Have you made these stunning meaningful stanza oneself or from some refernce....No big words to say just enivable and simply touching one's heart :)

Two thumd up !!!


I like the two ones which have coloured simply outstanding and meaningful close to the heart and life ....Reality !!!


God bless you and keep on


Regards

Snob

no reference .......
the only reference is me .....

thankyou for you kind comments

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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waoo...wot a....................Naqst...there is absolutely no doubt that you got a good immagination and writting power...keep it up :blush:

[snobbish]

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no reference .......
the only reference is me .....

thankyou for you kind comments

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose

if that is so....then i can bet wihtout any hesitation no one can stop you to become second Allama iqbal........:)


cheers !!

And belive me i can fell the smell of yr lovly flowers that you sent on my way ........

[NaQsh]

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if that is so....then i can bet wihtout any hesitation no one can stop you to become second Allama iqbal........:)


cheers !!

And belive me i can fell the smell of yr lovly flowers that you sent on my way ........

Allama Iqbal ....I dont think so
I dont think ke mere nacheez si poetry can be related to his
He wrote for another cause.........Great great poets

nonetheless thanx
and your most welcome .....:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose my pleasure

[NaQsh]

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waoo...wot a....................Naqst...there is absolutely no doubt that you got a good immagination and writting power...keep it up :blush:

:blush: dont flatter me amir
this is nothing :)
but thanx
I just hope that it was understandable

[Z.]

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Simply Superb :rose
you have put the feelings into words v nicely...
waitin for more :thmbup:

And back and forth the pendulum sways

-As I live and die, yet another day

[ummid]

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awesome de... loss ma words..:)
be happy always:rose
love you....

['SamRazi']

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Speechles ................. :) .......... I liked these best ........
trust me dear mujhe english poetry ka zada shok to nahi magar kabhi kabhi parhti hoon ........ magar tumhara likha parh ker I felt as I have never happend to read anything good til date ......... its realy awsome .............. keep it up ..... its great effort

and waitin for more from u :insha:

[Masood]

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Am I merely a shadow that has no trace??

Brought momentarily; unto the human race.



Perhaps those thoughts are hard to resist,

Sometimes I wonder if I really exist!

Superb, every sentence expresses a feeling which is touching the depth of my heart - sometimes I wonder if I really exist!

Each time you come up with a poem, it's a masterpiece - Serena keep writing please - adore u :rose

[NaQsh]

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Simply Superb :rose
you have put the feelings into words v nicely...
waitin for more :thmbup:

Thankyou for taking your time to read :rose
thanx for your comments

[NaQsh]

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awesome de... loss ma words..:)
be happy always:rose
love you....

nahin nahin dont loose your words ....find them please:zuban:

love you :hug: