~Scattered Feelings~

[NaQsh]

My personal poetry :):rose
My first attempt
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SCATTERED FEELINGS

Engulfed by the darkness

Of such immense sadness

I stand there breathing

Listening to my heart beating

What is this that I am feeling??

Life passes by without a trace

Like fingers through lace

That glides with such haste

Sorrow has no vow

A vow of despair ....

a despair so persistant

Blinded I am by its element

Anguish has no name

That has no face

A non ending race

Alas I stand there alone trembling

Listening to my heart beating

What is this that I am feeling??

[*Hala*]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

welcome Naqsh ji ...

very nice sharing... keep writing and sharing ...be happy:rose

[NaQsh]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

welcome Naqsh ji ...

very nice sharing... keep writing and sharing ...be happy:rose

thankyou Hala:rose

[rokr]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

nice work..!!!

[Wafa]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

very nice poetry naqsh....keep writing......:phool:

[NaQsh]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

nice work..!!!

thanx:rose

[NaQsh]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

very nice poetry naqsh....keep writing......:phool:

aww sho shweet thanks wafa:lpop:

[Masood]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

That's the way some times you feel, when things go wrong, when sadness fills ur heart, when shadows are bigger than ur height, when everything seems to go the wrong way - these are the feelings. You see 100s of thousands of ppl on railway station each day - every face has a story behind it - but who cares?

[NaQsh]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

That's the way some times you feel, when things go wrong, when sadness fills ur heart, when shadows are bigger than ur height, when everything seems to go the wrong way - these are the feelings. You see 100s of thousands of ppl on railway station each day - every face has a story behind it - but who cares?

were you trying to make a remark,statement or a compliment?

[Masood]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

were you trying to make a remark,statement or a compliment?

Just a scattered feeling from a scattered man :p

[Z.]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

^ bro. sometimes i like to give lectures :P but i better keep shut for a moment :P




wonderful Naqsh!

i liked the choice of words plus the rhythm

keep it up :thmbup:

[NaQsh]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

^ bro. sometimes i like to give lectures :P but i better keep shut for a moment :P




wonderful Naqsh!

i liked the choice of words plus the rhythm

keep it up :thmbup:

yes xenya your right
thankyou for liking it :rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

Saying "nice sharing' will not be enough to justify from our side. It is simply superb...it reflects you have good command in compiling ur ideas in beautiful words. Very Nice NaQsh...keep on sharing

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

Just a scattered feeling from a scattered man :p

You are no more a scattered man, your spare parts are available in the market :lpop:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: ~Scattered Feelings~

^ bro. sometimes i like to give lectures :P but i better keep shut for a moment :P




wonderful Naqsh!

i liked the choice of words plus the rhythm

keep it up :thmbup:

instead of lectures, ur bro needs a chill-pill :p