Allah Miyaa'n Allah Miyaa'n

[hayaa_n]

:rose Allah miyaa'n Allah miyaa'n
:rose Tu bakhsh day sab ghaltiya'n
:rose Ashk-e-nidaamat hai'n rawaa'n
:rose Maihfooz rakh ham sab ki jaa'n
:rose Paish aaiy na koi ziyaa'n
:rose Muslim ki himmat kar jawaa'n

[:Qassim:]

Re: Allah Miyaa'n Allah Miyaa'n

:rose Allah miyaa'n Allah miyaa'n
:rose Tu bakhsh day sab ghaltiya'n
:rose Ashk-e-nidaamat hai'n rawaa'n
:rose Maihfooz rakh ham sab ki jaa'n
:rose Paish aaiy na koi ziyaa'n
:rose Muslim ki himmat kar jawaa'n
:rose Tay kar sakai'n har imtaiha'n
:rose Seenay pay likh harf-e-Quraa'n
:rose Hay middha'n khuaa'n mairi zubaa'n
:rose Aiy maalik-e-kown.o.makaa'n
:rose Har shaih mai'n hay jalwaa ayaa'n
:rose Nouk-e-qalam mai'n kab hay jaa'n
:rose Taareef ho kiyu'n kar bayaa'n
:rose Allah miyaa'n Allah miyaa'n
:rose Tu bakhsh day sab ghaltiyaa'n

Salaam

Haya I am impressed with the rythm in your poem ... Kamaal kii rawaanii hai nazam meN ... Daad qubool keejiay :phool:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Allah Miyaa'n Allah Miyaa'n

Assalam.o.aleikum
Qaasmi Ji Jazaak Allah.Bouhat khushi huwi aap kay reply say.khush rahiye.:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Allah Miyaa'n Allah Miyaa'n

mashaALLAH very nice

[hayaa_n]

Re: Allah Miyaa'n Allah Miyaa'n

mashaALLAH very nice

Jazaak Allah:)