Chaand nikla.........

[zmufti]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

arey baap re zarqa sis 9 ashaar ki ghazal mein 7 matle :D maine matle likhne chorh diya aur sis apane shuru kar diye lolz.... waise ghazal bahut khoobsurat hai...st pe bhi parhi thi ....daad pesh hai :rose

shummu jee
ghazal ki pazeeraaii ke liye aap ki mamnoon hooN
khush rahiye
zarqa
ab pata nahiN matle likhna achchii baat hai ya buri baat
(aap ko kuch ilm ho to bataiye)
mujh se to tuk bandi ho saki pesh kardi

[shummu]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

shummu jee
ghazal ki pazeeraaii ke liye aap ki mamnoon hooN
khush rahiye
zarqa
ab pata nahiN matle likhna achchii baat hai ya buri baat
(aap ko kuch ilm ho to bataiye)
mujh se to tuk bandi ho saki pesh kardi

kuch ise hunar maante hain to kuch aib kyonki unka maanna hai ke isse ghazal ki khoobsurati zaayel hoti hai...pehle main bahut multi matla's likhti thi magar ab band kar diya lekin ye zameen aisi thi ke is mein matle hi zyaada ho rahe the...maine bhi kayi matle likh daale...

[jia]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

very nice bohat chi ghazl hay

[i see u]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

very nice zarqa jee
keep it up

[zmufti]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

kuch ise hunar maante hain to kuch aib kyonki unka maanna hai ke isse ghazal ki khoobsurati zaayel hoti hai...pehle main bahut multi matla's likhti thi magar ab band kar diya lekin ye zameen aisi thi ke is mein matle hi zyaada ho rahe the...maine bhi kayi matle likh daale...

shukria Shummu jee
khush rahiye

[zmufti]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

very nice zarqa jee
keep it up

shukria
Khush rahiye
zmufti

[*Hijab*]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

bohat he acha likha hai

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Chaand nikla.........

Bahoot khoob very nice poetry