..........dena chahiye

[zmufti]

.......dena chahiye

[*Rida*]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
Zarqa........aap itna piyara kaisay likh laiti hain....
kuch shair tu is qadar.....ufff ....samajh nahin aaraha kaisay tareef karon....
yunhi likhti rehiye aur hum say share karti rehain....:phool:

[zmufti]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
Zarqa........aap itna piyara kaisay likh laiti hain....
kuch shair tu is qadar.....ufff ....samajh nahin aaraha kaisay tareef karon....
yunhi likhti rehiye aur hum say share karti rehain....:phool:

Rida jee
aap ka husn-e-nazar hai warna maiN abhee kissi qabil nahiNrose:rose
sada khush rahiye
zmufti

[zapk]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

Bohat khubsurat zarqa:rose Bohat gahri soch rakhti hain aap.Aik aik shair naginay ki manand hai.Aap apni kitab shai karwain to mujhay zaroor bataiay ga.:rose

[zmufti]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

Bohat khubsurat zarqa:rose Bohat gahri soch rakhti hain aap.Aik aik shair naginay ki manand hai.Aap apni kitab shai karwain to mujhay zaroor bataiay ga.:rose

aap ki zarra nawazi hai
kitaab shaya karte darti hooN
khareeday ga kon
is liye aik cd bananey ka irada hai
aap ko zaroor bataooN gi inshallah
khush rahiye

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

wah wah zarqa jee bohot khub bohot he khub ,aap ki shaairana salahiaton ka jitna bhi daad dia jaae kum hai,aap jub bhi likhhti hain kamal ka aur ghazab ka likhhti hain,maashaallah likhhti rahain aur muskuraati rahain

[Wafa]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

bohot bohot zabardast ghazal likhe hai...MashAllah aap tu bohot he ache shaira hai..likhte rahein aur hamaray saath share karea ga.......:rose

[zmufti]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

wah wah zarqa jee bohot khub bohot he khub ,aap ki shaairana salahiaton ka jitna bhi daad dia jaae kum hai,aap jub bhi likhhti hain kamal ka aur ghazab ka likhhti hain,maashaallah likhhti rahain aur muskuraati rahain

ghazal ki pazeeraaii ke liye aap ki mamnooN hooN
regards
zmufti

[zmufti]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

bohot bohot zabardast ghazal likhe hai...MashAllah aap tu bohot he ache shaira hai..likhte rahein aur hamaray saath share karea ga.......:rose

shukria Wafa saheba
khush rahiye
zmufti

[shummu]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

2. jab ishq ka nisaab hi tabdeel ho gayya
to naam bhee wafa ka mitta dena chaahiye

3. Har shakhs hai ghulaam yahaN apne nafs ka
ikhlaas ki rawish ko bhula dena chahiye

4. barbaad ho chukka hai mirre dil ka yeh chaman
khawboN ki titliyoN ko uRa dena chahiye

5. Manoos ho chuke haiN andheroN se is qadar
taaroN ko, aur qamar ko bhuja dena chahiye

7. pindaar ki shikast ne be haal kar diyya
apni ana ke but ko gira dena chahiye

8. aawaaz ab zameer ki sunta nahiN koi
ehsaas ki chubhan ko sula dena chahiye

wah zarqa sis..wah kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai khaaskar quoted ashaar bahut pasand aaye........dili daad pesh hai qubool farmaayeiN :rose
shumaila

[zmufti]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

wah zarqa sis..wah kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai khaaskar quoted ashaar bahut pasand aaye........dili daad pesh hai qubool farmaayeiN :rose
shumaila

shukria Shummu jee
khush rahiye

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

outstanding
superb
just on the top
and, and .....:mm:

just keep sharing:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

Perfect poet...:em:
i really like it second last.

[zmufti]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

outstanding
superb
just on the top
and, and .....:mm:

just keep sharing:rose

shukria Saba saheba
khush rahiye
zmufti

[zmufti]

Re: ..........dena chahiye

Perfect poet...:em:
i really like it second last.

shukria Khalil saheb