Woh Jazbe nahi Baqi..!!

[Yaaram]

Asslmaoalikum :rose....

[:Qassim:]

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Asslmaoalikum :rose....

Salaam

Bohot achchhe Yaaram! :thmbup:

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[silver nightingale]

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salam
buhat khoob aap wakai kamal likhte hain. i m really very impressed
aur lagta hai k aap ka aur mera taste bhi kafi milta hai.i think .Iqbal is ur favourute poet right?
mere bhi favourite poet wohi hain.
waise best of luck 4 ur future
sada aise hi accha likhte rahein aur khush rahein
allah hafiz

[Aania]

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bohat hi zabar10 Yaaram ji
likhtey rahye...... really awesome....piece of poetry.....thnx to share it dude....

[WOH LARKI]

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hnmmmm Yaaram kiyoon itnay ulajh gaye ho? kaheen mayoos say nazer aatay ho to kaheen nai musafaton ki tALASH mein ho?? I m really lost after reading this..........lekin boht acha likha hey aap ne. Allah aap ko aap k iradon per amal kernay mein maded day ameen.(per aik behn k sath kiya hua wahda bhi yad rakhna:),ok?)

[Yaaram]

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meri zindgee main kuch nahi raha :(

[hayaa_n]

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Yaraam Ji aap ki yeh nazm bhi dil pay lagi kay bouhat dil say likhi gaai hay.Maayusi to kfr hay jab tak zindagi hay umeed ki low dheemi na parnay dijiye ga.Zindagi ki aankho'n mai'n aankhai'n daal kay daikhtay rahiye.mushkil ko hi mushkil mai'n daal diya ja'aiy to kaisa rahay ga?:)

[Yaaram]

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Yaraam Ji aap ki yeh nazm bhi dil pay lagi kay bouhat dil say likhi gaai hay.Maayusi to kfr hay jab tak zindagi hay umeed ki low dheemi na parnay dijiye ga.Zindagi ki aankho'n mai'n aankhai'n daal kay daikhtay rahiye.mushkil ko hi mushkil mai'n daal diya ja'aiy to kaisa rahay ga?:)

Jee shukrya .......try to :) InshAllah

[Baad-e-Saba]

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:masha

[Yaaram]

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pasand karne ka shukrya saba