Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

[Yaaram]

Asslmaoalikum :)

[ChEeNaThEgReAt]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......bhuut hi khubsoorat nazam hai :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......bhuut hi khubsoorat nazam hai :)

Shukrya cheena..Zara nawazi haay aapki :)

[perfectly_created]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Adaab mohteram Yaaram ~ :rose

Bhuulna bhulaana --- ajee kahaN mumkin hai huzuur. khel chaar.roza ho ya chand lamhoN par muheet; naqsh apne sada k liye choR jaata hai. Wasi Shah keh gaye haiN k:

tumhaiN bhulaana hi awwal to dastaras meiN nahin
jo ikhtiyaar bhi hota to kya bhula dete

aik jaan.daar nazm pesh karne par dili mubarik.baad qubuul karaiN. inaayat karne ka bohat shukria!

Allah Nigehbaan

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Adaab mohteram Yaaram ~ :rose

Bhuulna bhulaana --- ajee kahaN mumkin hai huzuur. khel chaar.roza ho ya chand lamhoN par muheet; naqsh apne sada k liye choR jaata hai. Wasi Shah keh gaye haiN k:

tumhaiN bhulaana hi awwal to dastaras meiN nahin
jo ikhtiyaar bhi hota to kya bhula dete

aik jaan.daar nazm pesh karne par dili mubarik.baad qubuul karaiN. inaayat karne ka bohat shukria!

Allah Nigehbaan

Bara lamba topic hay.....bohat kuch likha ja skata hay is per bas aap ka shukrya ada karna tha ke aap ne nazm ko pasand kya

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Bara lamba topic hay.....bohat kuch likha ja skata hay is per bas aap ka shukrya ada karna tha ke aap ne nazm ko pasand kya

[ghurob-e-aftab]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

w/salam

janab buhat khoob ,, nazaam pasand aaie buhat sii daad qabool karian ..

khush rahiya :)

[muskaan]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

bauhat hi sada si magar khubsurat si nazam hai...kash bhoolna itna hi asaan hota to woh yadain woh batain jo dard daiti hain insaan pehlai bhoolta :)

khush rahiyai :)

[:Qassim:]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Salaam

Yaaram waqa'ee meN aap ne aik bohot hii khoobsurat aur pur.acar nazam kahii hai ... Daad qubool keejiay :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

w/salam

janab buhat khoob ,, nazaam pasand aaie buhat sii daad qabool karian ..

khush rahiya :)

Bohat shukrya aap ki pasandeedgi ka zara nawazi hay aapki

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

bauhat hi sada si magar khubsurat si nazam hai...kash bhoolna itna hi asaan hota to woh yadain woh batain jo dard daiti hain insaan pehlai bhoolta :)

khush rahiyai :)

Jee bohat shukrya ............pasand karne ka

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Salaam

Yaaram waqa'ee meN aap ne aik bohot hii khoobsurat aur pur.acar nazam kahii hai ... Daad qubool keejiay :rose

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Bohat shukrya Qasim bhayya aap ki zara nawazi hay

[hayaa_n]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Yaaram ji itna achcha likhtay hain:masha kay parh kay dil khush ho jaata hay kay main aap say bhi aur bhi seniors poets kay darmiyaan hu'n is baat ki bouhat khushi hay k aap sab ka read karkay bhi bouhat kuch seekh rahi hu'n.khush rahiye.Aameen:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Haya Jee bass Allah pak ka karam hay aap ka bohat shukrya :)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Tumhain Bhulana hay..!!

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Nice Yaaram

FeamanmAllah