Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

[Yaaram]

Asslamoalikum aik taazaa tareen nazm pesh hai umeed hi pasand aaye gi :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

In roman urdu
Ab ke rahem karna Mujhpe..
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karein ge tum se ab ke
wo pyar bhari batein
ke jin ki chah ne
humain kahin ka nahi chora
Basss zamane ke lye chora
baass itna karam kar do
kahin se apne dil main
rahem ka maada le aao
mujhpe wo rahem karo
wo karam karo
ke main kabhi kisi se
rahem ki appeal na karon
ke ab to dimagh bhi boora ho gaya hai
tumhain socha bhi nahi jata
tumhare naqsh bhi dhundhlke main hain
judayi ki dhundh ne inhain chupa rakha hai
hum ne bhi chehrey per
hansi ka naqab saja rakha hai
ab ke mujhpe wo
rahem karna ke
main tumse juda na ho sakoN
ke tumhare dil main
parinday ki tarah qed ho jaon
tum se juda na ho paon
ab ke mujhpe wo rahem karna---------------------------------
Yaaram......08/20/2005
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[shy]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

v nice yaaram :thmbup:

[aik_lerki]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

bohat khoob Yaaram
bohat achaa likha hai aap nay
Thankx 4 sharing :)

[endless-love13]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

Very nice Uncle........ thx for sharing

[La'hasil]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

Khoob :rose


Acha likha hia :rose


khush raho :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

AAp sab ki pasandeedgi ka shukrya thnx :rose

[hayaa_n]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

Aap ka likha huwa sab read kar rahi hu'n. sab is qadar umda likha hay aap nay kay qaail ho gaai hu'n kay Yaaram ji aik hasaas shaair hain jo apni sochon ko lafzon ka bouhat acha pairahan paihnaatay hain.Masha Allah:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

Jee bohat shukrya ........warna hum is qabil kahan jee.......baqi hum hassas kab hoe....

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

[Yaaram]

Re: Ab ke wo rahem karna mujhpe..!!

Bohat naawazish :)

[ahsaas]

very very nice ..........

[Yaaram]

shukrya ji