Mere jeene ki khushi main...

[Yaaram]

Asslamoalikum umeed hai ke pasand aaye gi yeh ghazal :) :rose

[La'hasil]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

Zaberdast :rose


BUhat acha likha hia Yaraam :rose


khush raho :)

[aik_lerki]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

sooperb
bohat bohat achii gazal likhe hai aap nay Yaaram :)
thankx 4 sharing :)

[Yaaram]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

aap donoN ka thanx :rose shukyra nawazish :)

[hayaa_n]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

Aap bouhat achay shaair hai'n.jo bhi likhtay hai'n kamaal likhtay hai'n.aap ka likha huwa har kalaam bouhat pur asar hay jo read kar k acha laga.Masha Allah:)

[Yaaram]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

Bohat shukrya Haya.......Thanx :rose

[Baad-e-Saba]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

niiiiiiiiice

[Yaaram]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

pasand karne ka shukrya saba

[ChaMpioN PaKiStaNi]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

Bohat khub

[ahsaas]

Re: Mere jeene ki khushi main...

super wording