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Re: Sahil Nahi Hota
W.Salam
zabardast !! buht hai umdhaa or behtreen lekha hai apni Wasi ji.. hamesh ki tarah... :clap:
baqi poetry ka tajziyaa Fire ji khoob karega. :pu can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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Re: Sahil Nahi Hota
shurkiya Hala Jee :)
Haan tou janab Wasi Sahab, aap nay tou apna fan hi bana liya mujhay... itnay khoobsurat alfaaz aur itni achi soch... yeh ghazal kuch mukhtalif lagi aap ki sabqa tehreeron say... shayed iss main pehli baar aap nay MASHWARAY bhi farahim kiya hain, har ghazal ki tarhan iss main bhi aik intizaar hay, ik dard hay kisi kay lout aanay ki chahat hay magar iss bar aik alag cheese yeh hay kay iss baar lout kay aanay ki baat tou hay magar ishq kay samandar main aap itni dooour nikal gayain hain kay lout kar aana na mumkin sa lag raha hay... bohat hi acha andaaz hay janab.... keep sharing.. aur haan yeh jamni color ki tehreer aur frame ishq ki piyaas main sookhay huway honton ki nishandahi kar raha hay.... :) keep sharing and khush rahyeh :)sigpic
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Re: Sahil Nahi Hota
Originally posted by thefire1 View Postshurkiya Hala Jee :)
Haan tou janab Wasi Sahab, aap nay tou apna fan hi bana liya mujhay... itnay khoobsurat alfaaz aur itni achi soch... yeh ghazal kuch mukhtalif lagi aap ki sabqa tehreeron say... shayed iss main pehli baar aap nay MASHWARAY bhi farahim kiya hain, har ghazal ki tarhan iss main bhi aik intizaar hay, ik dard hay kisi kay lout aanay ki chahat hay magar iss bar aik alag cheese yeh hay kay iss baar lout kay aanay ki baat tou hay magar ishq kay samandar main aap itni dooour nikal gayain hain kay lout kar aana na mumkin sa lag raha hay... bohat hi acha andaaz hay janab.... keep sharing.. aur haan yeh jamni color ki tehreer aur frame ishq ki piyaas main sookhay huway honton ki nishandahi kar raha hay.... :) keep sharing and khush rahyeh :)
Bahot bahot shukriya janab,
Aap k reply ka hamein bahot intazar rehta hai bahot tafseeli hota hai aap ka reply ek baat kehna chahonga k sirf tareef mat kiya karen koi khaami nazar aaye to woh bhi bata diya karen,:)sigpic
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Re: Sahil Nahi Hota
Originally posted by *Hala* View PostW.Salam
zabardast !! buht hai umdhaa or behtreen lekha hai apni Wasi ji.. hamesh ki tarah... :clap:
baqi poetry ka tajziyaa Fire ji khoob karega. :p
ji fire sahib ka reply aa gaya hai bahot acha tajziya kaerte hain woh :)sigpic
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Re: Sahil Nahi Hota
Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View PostAap ka bhi bahot bahot shukriya Hala ji
ji fire sahib ka reply aa gaya hai bahot acha tajziya kaerte hain wohu can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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Re: Sahil Nahi Hota
Shukriya Hala jee :)
Wasi bhai... main kahan shaaer hoon jo khamiyon nikaloon main tou khamiyon main bhi khoobiyoon ki talash main rehta hoon!!! Rahi baat islaah ki tou humari yeh auqaat kahan janb kay hum kisi ki islaah karain, humain tou khudh Ilsaah ki zaroorat hay...
haan agar shaair main WAZAN nahin hua tou zaroor batayoon ga, apnay Khan sahab kay saath tou isi wazan per kaafi chalti rehti hay lolzzz :)sigpic
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