~*~*~* Shikway ~*~*~*

[WASI ANJUM]

Asslam O Alekum

[thefire1]

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Walaikum Assalaam

Wah Wasi Anjum.... bohat hi achi ghazal likhi hay aap nay.... go kay naam tou shikway ka dia hay, magar iss main wafa hay, dua hay, ansoon hain, rat jagay hain, khusboo hay, mohabbat hay, gila hay, aur sab say baRh kar woh armaan hain jo adhooray khuwaab ki tarhan bikhar kar reh gayain hain jinn ko samaitnay ki koshish main aap alfaz ka intikhaab kar rahay hain kay kaisay inn sab bikhray huway armanoon ko samait liya jayay.... aaap ki tehreer ka dard humain yahan mehsoos horaha hay jaisay aap uss aik awaaz ki talash main hoon jo aap kay iss muntashir wajood jo ikhata karay.... yaa shayed uss awaaz say aap ka toota hua wajood raiza raiza hojayay...!!!

Raiza raiza hogaya main, tu nay jab awaaz di
Teri khamooshi say tha, main iss qadar touta hua!

khush rahyeh janab, jab shaaeri dard ban kar apnay aap ko alfaaz main dhaal kar manzar-e-aam per aati hay tou dil kay halaat chupaana bohat mushkil hota hay :)

[WASI ANJUM]

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Bahot bahot shukriya janab...........aap ne waqai dard ko mehsoos ker liya jo mene likha hai abhi to bahot kuch likhnay se reh gaya Alfaz saath he chhor gay

[*Hala*]

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W.salam
itni sady or touchy hai apki poetry...
buht hai alaa lekha hai Wasi ji...
khush rahein

[WASI ANJUM]

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BAhot bahot shukriya aap ka Hala ji

[crystal_thinking]

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Walikum Salam...

bhot he achi poem hay yeh apki...full of feelings Aitbar Sajid k bad ap mry favorite poet ban gy hn wo b sady sady per bhot he heart touching poems likhty hn or ap b... hamesha khush rahey....flower

[Tanha Hassan]

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beautiful poetry wasi

[WASI ANJUM]

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Walikum Salam...

bhot he achi poem hay yeh apki...full of feelings Aitbar Sajid k bad ap mry favorite poet ban gy hn wo b sady sady per bhot he heart touching poems likhty hn or ap b... hamesha khush rahey....flower

Bahot bahot shukriya crystal

Aap ne hamein Aitbaar sajid k saath mila liya hum to poetry k ABC bhi nahi jante pasand kerne ka bahot bahot shukriya :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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beautiful poetry wasi

Thank you dear :rose

[shanzy]

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full of feel ...........realy nice