~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

[WASI ANJUM]

Meri Ek Gazal

[ahsaas]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

buhat khoobsurat ...Ap k jazbat aur Soch perh k acha laga,...
awesum:)

[raafi]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

wah wah... ur cration is really Good n superb...
well expressed....

wese muskaan se yaad aaya.... k

Kaise kahen mulakat ka aalam kya hua,
Usne nigahon se mere dil ko phir chua,
Uske labz motiyon se bikharte chale gaye,
Uski muskaan yu lagne lagi jaise koi dua..

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

shukriya dear
pasand karnay ka bahoot shukriya
aap ne bahoot khooburat shair likha hai

Uski muskaan yu lagne lagi jaise koi dua..

[wajid hanif]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

Salam Baro Kia Baat Hai Bahut Ache Hai......:) Really Nice''

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

Salam Baro Kia Baat Hai Bahut Ache Hai......:) Really Nice''

Walekum Asslam
Shukriya Wajid:rose

[Hashim Raza]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

bohot khoob wasi anjum sahab
khush rahin sada
nice one

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

Bahoot bahoot shukriya Hashim Raza sahib

[raafi]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

shukriya dear
pasand karnay ka bahoot shukriya
aap ne bahoot khooburat shair likha hai

Uski muskaan yu lagne lagi jaise koi dua..

meinay nahi likha..... i dont know how to make poetry writing.......

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

meinay nahi likha..... i dont know how to make poetry writing.......

choice to aap ki hai na janab
nice choice:)

[J.KHAN]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

Bahoot bahoot khoob likha wasi bahiiiiiiii Na
perh k bahoot dookh hoowa wasi bahiiiiiiii.

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

Bahoot bahoot khoob likha wasi bahiiiiiiii Na
perh k bahoot dookh hoowa wasi bahiiiiiiii.

thanx j.khan sahib
mein samjha nahi k aap ko parh kar dukh hua
ya
na parh kar:cc:

[Ali jee]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

bohot khoob wasi anjum dad qabool karo ...........

:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

Thanx Ali jee
khush rahen

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~A waqat Apni Raftaar ko kuch kam kar de~

bohat khub :ff: