GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

[WASI ANJUM]

~Asslam O Alekum~
~~Meri Ek Gazal~~

[Ainy Guriya]

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bohot achi poetry apki very nice

[Hashim Raza]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

bohot khoob wasi anjum sahab
nice effort
khush rahin

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

bohot achi poetry apki very nice

thanx ANEY
pasand karnay ka bahoot bahoot shukriya:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

bohot khoob wasi anjum sahab
nice effort
khush rahin

Shukriya Hashim Raza sahib:rose.....aap bhi bahoot achha likhtay hain

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

bohat khub wasi ji :rose :rose :rose :rose

pehly shair k 2nd misry main "barhaya phir dosti ka rishta he to tha" aap ne hay likh dia hai mery khayal main typing mistake hogi isko sahe kar lain

[J.KHAN]

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Nice poetry wasi bahiiiiii

[ahsaas]

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Her baar ki terha buhat achha likha hai Ap ney ...but So Sadi..:(

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

bohat khub wasi ji :rose :rose :rose :rose

pehly shair k 2nd misry main "barhaya phir dosti ka rishta he to tha" aap ne hay likh dia hai mery khayal main typing mistake hogi isko sahe kar lain

bahoot bahoot shukriya sameera ji
mein mistke sahi kar doonga
bahoot bahoot shukriya k aap ne bataya

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

Nice poetry wasi bahiiiiii

Shukriya j.khan sahib

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

Her baar ki terha buhat achha likha hai Ap ney ...but So Sadi..:(

thanx Ahsaas............bas jo tha likh diya :)

[GumShuda]

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Walaikumsalam.

MashAllah bohat achi Ghazal likhi hai. Rawani bi achi hai aur alfaz bi sada istemaal kiye hain. Maza aya , Pehlay shair kay doosray misray mein imla ki ghalti hai bas osko fix kar dain. pasand aye Ghazal.
Khush rahein...
Wasalam

[WASI ANJUM]

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Walaikumsalam.

MashAllah bohat achi Ghazal likhi hai. Rawani bi achi hai aur alfaz bi sada istemaal kiye hain. Maza aya , Pehlay shair kay doosray misray mein imla ki ghalti hai bas osko fix kar dain. pasand aye Ghazal.
Khush rahein...
Wasalam

pasand karnay ka Bahoot bahoot shukriya janab:rose
jee mene woh galti dekhi hai mein sahi karloonga:)

[farahan]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

Tu nahi toh kissi aur sang sai tuut hi jaata
Dil kya tha mera? Ek sheesha hi toh tha

superb.........
Bohat acchi ghazal hai

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: GuZrA Ik AuR DiL pE hAdSa He tO ThA

Tu nahi toh kissi aur sang sai tuut hi jaata
Dil kya tha mera? Ek sheesha hi toh tha

superb.........
Bohat acchi ghazal hai

Bahot shukriya aap ki pasanddedgi ka :rose