~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

[WASI ANJUM]

Meri ek nazam

[jia]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

very nice poetry WASI:)
bohat acha likha hay app nay....aik dm such kaha hay:)
keep it up
b happy:rose

[raafi]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

wasi bahut khoob akkasi ki hai..... wese bhi mujhe aap ki poetry ka intizaar rahta hai aur aap nay kaafi dino kay baad aap nay yeh poetry share ki.........

[Gul]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

assalam O alaikum! Wasi!
aap nay tu sab kuch keh daala..
itni talkhiyan....jo hamaray loag seh rahay hein sab....!
Buhat dil ko choo leynay wali tehreer .........!
U have the strong feelings ..jee Keep on writing ....
and do express what ever u think..as kabhi kabhi kisi k
bhi alfaz ka Positive asar kisi ko b Sudhaar sakta hai ...........!
aap tu phir kitna Khoobsoorat way mein likhtay hein
khush rahiayay ..Dua hai k omer k in pichlay guzray lamhoun
nay jo takaleef deein nia saal iss ka madawa ban k samnay aa-ay ameen Khush rhaiyay:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

very nice poetry WASI:)
bohat acha likha hay app nay....aik dm such kaha hay:)
keep it up
b happy:rose

Bahoot shukriya jia
khush rahen:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

wasi bahut khoob akkasi ki hai..... wese bhi mujhe aap ki poetry ka intizaar rahta hai aur aap nay kaafi dino kay baad aap nay yeh poetry share ki.........

bahoot bahoot shukriya raafi.:rose......sun kar khushi hui k kisi ko to meri poetry
ka intazzar rehta hai.....:)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

assalam O alaikum! Wasi!

aap nay tu sab kuch keh daala..
itni talkhiyan....jo hamaray loag seh rahay hein sab....!
Buhat dil ko choo leynay wali tehreer .........!
U have the strong feelings ..jee Keep on writing ....
and do express what ever u think..as kabhi kabhi kisi k
bhi alfaz ka Positive asar kisi ko b Sudhaar sakta hai ...........!
aap tu phir kitna Khoobsoorat way mein likhtay hein
khush rahiayay ..Dua hai k omer k in pichlay guzray lamhoun
nay jo takaleef deein nia saal iss ka madawa ban k samnay aa-ay ameen Khush rhaiyay:rose

Walekum Asslam Gul:)
bahho bahoot shukriya k aap ne itnay khoobsurat alfaz
mein meri poetry per comments likhay.........mene pehlay bhi
kaha tha k mujhe likhnay k liye sochna nahi parta bas jab jee mein
aata hai jo aata hai likh deta hoon
thanx again Gul:rose

[Pakiza]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

bahut khubsorat
bahut pur asar
hum bhi pur ummid hai ke
ye naaya saal guzarney waley saal ki tarhan na ho

khush rahin

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

buhat khoob

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

bahut khubsorat
bahut pur asar
hum bhi pur ummid hai ke
ye naaya saal guzarney waley saal ki tarhan na ho

khush rahin

Shukriya pakiza:rose
Insha Allah agar Allah Pak ne chaha
to ye saal zaroor hamaray mulk aur
hamaray liye khushiyan laaiga

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

buhat khoob

bahoot bahoot shukriya MSA :)

[J.KHAN]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

veryyyyyyyyyyyyy niceeeee

[tabish]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

waah zabardast wasi
pichlay saal ko to aap ne bahoot achha define kiya
shandaar likhte raho

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

veryyyyyyyyyyyyy niceeeee

thanx khan sahib:)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~~Guzray Huay saal se kuch shikway~~

waah zabardast wasi
pichlay saal ko to aap ne bahoot achha define kiya
shandaar likhte raho

bahoot bahoot shukriya tabish :rose