Hum ko tanhaaiOn mai jeene do

[shummu]

Puranai mukhtasir ghazal :rose

Hum ko tanhaaiOn mai jeene do
chupke chupke ye ashk peene do

apnii chaahat ka mat sahaaraa do
humko tanha ye zakhm seene do

dil se yaadeN na miTne paayeN gii
in ko aise hi dil mein jeene do

darti hooN phir kahiiN na beh jaaoN
rehne do tum na ye safeene do

wo hi dikhta hai meri aankhoN meiN
chaahe kitne bhii tum a'ine do

chheen lo haafizah 'Shumaila' kaa
bhoolne ke ya tum qareene do

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Hum ko tanhaaiOn mai jeene do

BAhot khoob janab daad qabool kijiye

[thefire1]

Re: Hum ko tanhaaiOn mai jeene do

Wah aik aur bohat hi meaningful aur khoobsurat alfaaz per mushtamil ghazal waqyi qabil-e-tareef hay. keep sharing and khush rahyeh :)

[Mani16]

Re: Hum ko tanhaaiOn mai jeene do

Shumailah G i think just think k aapka name jo aap as takhallus use kerti hain wo rawani ko halka sa disterb kerta hy,,,,,,
ye just meri think hy B'cz mujhay bhi koi khas pta nhi chalta behron or ozaan ka,,,,

Hope you dont Mind

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Hum ko tanhaaiOn mai jeene do

soooooooooooper and doopeeeeeer Poetry dearoooooo