Humne tumko,tumne humko,kho diyaa!

[shummu]

Ek puraani choti si saada si ghazal...:rose

Humne tumko,tumne humko,kho diyaa!
har gaDhii ye sochke dil ro diyaa

ho gaye ek doosre se hum judaa
beej furqat kaa ye kisne bo diyaa

umr bhar kaa rog kaisaa lag gayaa!
sochte haiN dil ye kyoN tum ko diyaa?

ho gaye kyoN hum se itne bad gumaaN
jo bhi tumne maanga,humne wo diyaa

tum se ab hum kyaa kareiN shikwaa gilaa
likkha tha qismat meiN,tumne jo diyaa

jaate jaate humne usse keh diyaa
dil hi kyaa,lo jaan de,tumko diyaa

cheenkar khushyaaN 'shumaila' kii,sabhii
Aye Khuda!gham itna kyoN usko diyaa?!!

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Humne tumko,tumne humko,kho diyaa!

Gilay shikwe judai ki baaten......yahi bachta hai aakhir mein ja ker

Bahot khoobsurat janab achi lagi aap ki Ghazal

[thefire1]

Re: Humne tumko,tumne humko,kho diyaa!

wah janab, bohat hi achi shaaeri hay, bohat dard aur karb hay aap kay lafzoon main, aur aap ko apny dard, gham, jazbaat, ehsaasat aur har ek guzray huway pal ko lafzoon main dhaal kar ashaar ki shakl main paish karna bakhoobi aata hay, keep sharing, bohat hi acha andaza-e-bayan hay.

[Mani16]

Re: Humne tumko,tumne humko,kho diyaa!

4th + 5th shair me mujhay kuch doubt sa hy baki ghazal bilkul fit hy
Boht he achhi
boht piari shairi,
keep sharing wid us

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Humne tumko,tumne humko,kho diyaa!

beautiful sharing :em:

[Yaaram]

Re: Humne tumko,tumne humko,kho diyaa!

beautiful ghazal. old is always gold :)