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    khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

    Salam ek puraani ghazal :rose


    Jaankar kyoN mujhe woh sataate rahe?
    kyoN sadaa hii meraa dil jalaate rahe?!

    pyaar ki raah meiN silsilaa ye raha
    rooThte woh rahe,hum manaate rahe!

    raat bhar yaad meiN unki royaa kiye
    har gaRhii jo hume bas sataate rahe!

    aag aisee lagii zindagii meiN,ke hum
    bas bujhaate rahe!bas bujhaate rahe!!

    kaT gayii umr sab ki khushii ke liye
    log lekin miraa dil dukhaate rahe!

    phool ne kar diyaa humko zakhmi bahut,
    hum to kaaNToN se daaman bachaate rahe!

    usne deke daghaa,hum ko apnaa kahaa!
    aur hum the ke baatoN meiN aate rahe!

    kar diyaa usne rusvaa bharii bazm meiN
    raaz-e-dil hum jise sab bataate rahe!

    kitne naadaan the jo samajh na sake
    khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

    Zindagii ne dikhaayiN bahut talkhiyaaN
    phir bhi naghme khushii ke hi gaate rahe!

    ranj-o-gham saare apne chupaate hue
    muskuraate rahe!muskuraate rahe!!
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  • #2
    Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

    waah kiya baat hai shummu bahot bahot he khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai
    sab k sab shair dil ko chhu jane wale hain
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    • #3
      Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

      buht umdaa...
      u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

      :pr:

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      • #4
        Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

        pyaar ki raah meiN silsilaa ye raha
        rooThte woh rahe,hum manaate rahe!

        kitne naadaan the jo samajh na sake
        khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe        !

        Boht khoob shuma'ilah G
        Boht achhi ghazal hy
        Boht pasand I,
        Keep writing & Keep sharing wid us,
        wait 4 your Next entry,
        Kub chupkay chupkay share ker di ????
        pta he nhi chala


        [COLOR="rgb(139, 0, 0)"]usne deke daghaa,hum ko apnaa kahaa!
        aur hum the ke baatoN meiN aate rahe!        [/COLOR]

        ranj-o-gham saare apne chupaate hue
        muskuraate rahe!muskuraate rahe!!

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        • #5
          Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

          Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
          waah kiya baat hai shummu bahot bahot he khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai
          sab k sab shair dil ko chhu jane wale hain
          bahut bahut shukriya is par khuloos daad ka!!!!!!!! :)

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          • #6
            Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

            Originally posted by *Hala* View Post
            buht umdaa...
            Thanx sis :rose

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            • #7
              Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

              Originally posted by Mani16 View Post
              pyaar ki raah meiN silsilaa ye raha
              rooThte woh rahe,hum manaate rahe!

              kitne naadaan the jo samajh na sake
              khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

              Boht khoob shuma'ilah G
              Boht achhi ghazal hy
              Boht pasand I,
              Keep writing & Keep sharing wid us,
              wait 4 your Next entry,
              Kub chupkay chupkay share ker di ????
              pta he nhi chala


              [COLOR="rgb(139, 0, 0)"]usne deke daghaa,hum ko apnaa kahaa![/color]
              [COLOR="rgb(139, 0, 0)"]aur hum the ke baatoN meiN aate rahe![/color]

              ranj-o-gham saare apne chupaate hue
              muskuraate rahe!muskuraate rahe!!
              Shukriya bahut bahut Imran jee...itni daad se nawaazne ke liye :)

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              • #8
                Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

                Originally posted by shummu View Post
                Salam ek puraani ghazal :rose




                Jaankar kyoN mujhe woh sataate rahe?
                kyoN sadaa hii meraa dil jalaate rahe?!

                pyaar ki raah meiN silsilaa ye raha
                rooThte woh rahe,hum manaate rahe!

                raat bhar yaad meiN unki royaa kiye
                har gaRhii jo hume bas sataate rahe!

                aag aisee lagii zindagii meiN,ke hum
                bas bujhaate rahe!bas bujhaate rahe!!

                kaT gayii umr sab ki khushii ke liye
                log lekin miraa dil dukhaate rahe!

                phool ne kar diyaa humko zakhmi bahut,
                hum to kaaNToN se daaman bachaate rahe!

                usne deke daghaa,hum ko apnaa kahaa!
                aur hum the ke baatoN meiN aate rahe!

                kar diyaa usne rusvaa bharii bazm meiN
                raaz-e-dil hum jise sab bataate rahe!

                kitne naadaan the jo samajh na sake
                khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

                Zindagii ne dikhaayiN bahut talkhiyaaN
                phir bhi naghme khushii ke hi gaate rahe!

                ranj-o-gham saare apne chupaate hue
                muskuraate rahe!muskuraate rahe!!
                Walaikum Assalaam Shummu Jee

                Bohat hi achay andaaz main aap nay apnay ahsasaat, jazbaat, halaat aur tasawuraat ko lafzoon main piroo kar issay inn khoobsurat aur dil ko cho jaanay waalay ashaar main dhaala hay, yaqeenan aisa lagta hay jaisay hum apnay aap say guftagoo kar rahay hoo, bohat hi umda soch jo qabil-e-tareef hay.

                Kayi baar iss ghazal ko paRha aur sochta raha kay aakhir kaun sa shaair haasil-e-ghazal hosakta hay, magar faisla nahin kar paya kiyonki har aik shaair apnay andar gehrayi aur aik dastaan chupayay huway hay.

                Phir bhi yeh shaair hay jo na jaanay kiyon dil kay taroon ko cho gaya, aur achanak isay paRh kar Dil main ek lehar si uthi hay abhi :)

                kaT gayii umr sab ki khushii ke liye
                log lekin miraa dil dukhaate rahe!

                aur dil chata hay kay aap say ijaazat loon kay iss kay aakhri misray main DUKHAATE ki jagah JALAATE laga doo, kiyonki DIL jab jalta hay tou bohat takleef daita hay, aik aisi jalan jo andar hi andar dil ko sulga diati hay...

                Insaan auroon ko khushi poohanchanay main kab apni zindagi jee laita hay, kab apnay hissay ka pyar kisi aur baant daita hay, kab apni khuwahishaat ko andar hi andar daba kar isay eik AAG main tabdeel kar laita hay, iss ka andaaza hi nahin rehta aur yoon lagta hay kay bas yehi tou naam hay zindagi ka kiyonki apni khushi kay liye tou har koi jeeta hay maza tou uss waqt hay jab insaan auroon ki khushi kay liye apni khusiyon ko qurbaan karday, aur ajar ki umeed us shaks say nahi balkay ALLAH SWT say karay kiyonki bilaakhir uss Pak Parwardigaar nay waada kia hay na hum sab kay saath kay "Baishak woh sabr karnay waloon kay saath hay"

                Maazrat agar mera response taweel hogaya hoo yaa aap kay shaair main iss tabdeeli ki baat ki ho, kiyonki main jo kuch dil main hoota hay ussay bila jhijhak share kar daita hoon pooray khuloos aur sachayi hay saath aur rahi meri afsaanwi baatain, yeh bhi zindagi ka hisa hay jo mera saath nahin choorti aur meri soch ko wahan tak lay jaati hay jahan jab dil jalta hay tou khushi hoti hay takleef nahin :)

                Isi tarhan apni khoobsurat tehreer say humain nawaztee rahain, jo kay humain itna kuch sochnay aur samajhnay per majboor kar day, khush rahyeh.
                Last edited by thefire1; 2 February 2010, 21:39.
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                • #9
                  Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

                  beautiful sharing dear
                  I aM Not a complete Idiot......Some parts are Missing........

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                  • #10
                    Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

                    Aslamo ele kum qable ehtram zindagi jee :rose
                    aik taweel arse ke bad ap ka taza klam parhne ki saadat hasil hoi jis ke liye is bazm ka mamnon ho.n Zindagi jee bohat hi umda Ghazal atta ki he ap ne wohi makhsos rang wohi lab o lehja magar kheyal me zeyda pukhatgi owr zeyda nudrat dikhei di MASHALLA meri janib se dili dad qabol ki jiye waslam Mukhlis Ramish jaan

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                    • #11
                      Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

                      Sab Kah Rahay Hai to Acha Hi Hoga. Roman Shaire Main To Parhta He Nahin.:(
                      :star1:

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                      • #12
                        Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

                        Originally posted by SAZ View Post
                        Sab Kah Rahay Hai to Acha Hi Hoga. Roman Shaire Main To Parhta He Nahin.:(

                        aww aap ke liye urdu version bhi upload kar diya...waiting for comments :salam:
                        Last edited by shummu; 14 January 2010, 18:27.

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                        • #13
                          Re: khwaab kii neev pe ghar banaate rahe!

                          Urdu main paRh kar bhi meray wohi comments hain tou roman urdu main paRh kar thay :)

                          Walaikum Assalaam Shummu Jee

                          Bohat hi achay andaaz main aap nay apnay ahsasaat, jazbaat, halaat aur tasawuraat ko lafzoon main piroo kar issay inn khoobsurat aur dil ko cho jaanay waalay ashaar main dhaala hay, yaqeenan aisa lagta hay jaisay hum apnay aap say guftagoo kar rahay hoo, bohat hi umda soch jo qabil-e-tareef hay.

                          Kayi baar iss ghazal ko paRha aur sochta raha kay aakhir kaun sa shaair haasil-e-ghazal hosakta hay, magar faisla nahin kar paya kiyonki har aik shaair apnay andar gehrayi aur aik dastaan chupayay huway hay.

                          Phir bhi yeh shaair hay jo na jaanay kiyon dil kay taroon ko cho gaya, aur achanak isay paRh kar Dil main ek lehar si uthi hay abhi

                          kaT gayii umr sab ki khushii ke liye
                          log lekin miraa dil dukhaate rahe!

                          aur dil chata hay kay aap say ijaazat loon kay iss kay aakhri misray main DUKHAATE ki jagah JALAATE laga doo, kiyonki DIL jab jalta hay tou bohat takleef daita hay, aik aisi jalan jo andar hi andar dil ko sulga diati hay...

                          Insaan auroon ko khushi poohanchanay main kab apni zindagi jee laita hay, kab apnay hissay ka pyar kisi aur baant daita hay, kab apni khuwahishaat ko andar hi andar daba kar isay eik AAG main tabdeel kar laita hay, iss ka andaaza hi nahin rehta aur yoon lagta hay kay bas yehi tou naam hay zindagi ka kiyonki apni khushi kay liye tou har koi jeeta hay maza tou uss waqt hay jab insaan auroon ki khushi kay liye apni khusiyon ko qurbaan karday, aur ajar ki umeed us shaks say nahi balkay ALLAH SWT say karay kiyonki bilaakhir uss Pak Parwardigaar nay waada kia hay na hum sab kay saath kay "Baishak woh sabr karnay waloon kay saath hay"

                          Maazrat agar mera response taweel hogaya hoo yaa aap kay shaair main iss tabdeeli ki baat ki ho, kiyonki main jo kuch dil main hoota hay ussay bila jhijhak share kar daita hoon pooray khuloos aur sachayi hay saath aur rahi meri afsaanwi baatain, yeh bhi zindagi ka hisa hay jo mera saath nahin choorti aur meri soch ko wahan tak lay jaati hay jahan jab dil jalta hay tou khushi hoti hay takleef nahin

                          Isi tarhan apni khoobsurat tehreer say humain nawaztee rahain, jo kay humain itna kuch sochnay aur samajhnay per majboor kar day, khush rahyeh.
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