Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

[shummu]

Salam ahl-e-bazm!:salam:

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke chauthe muqaable ke saath haazir hun... bahut hi aasaan aur rawaaN behr hai..ummeed hai aap sab ko aasaani hogi girah lagane mein.

misra:

'JunooN se guzarne ko jee chaahtaaa hai '
(shakeel badayuni)

behr:

fa-oo-lun , fa-oo-lun , fa-oo-lun , fa-oo-lun
1 2 2, 1 2 2, 1 2 2 ,1 2 2

radeef:

ko jee chaahtaa hai

mashoor ghazal isi behr mein:

tire ishq ki intehaa chaahtaa huN
miree saadgii dekh kyaa chaahtaa huN

Ummeed hai aap sab mard-o-khwaateen barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!:thmbup:

ek banda/bandi kitni bhi girah laga sakte hain.

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

~ALL THE BEST~

Last date for ur entries: 30th August

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

maine misra tabdeel kar diya hai.

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

hmmm kya hua misra mushkil to nahi lag raha aap logon ko? :)

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

koshish karin ge

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

Meetha Beher hy
Great Fikra hy
KON KEHTA HY mushkil hy ???:donno:

maine misra tabdeel kar diya hai.

[Mani16]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

keh tu dja k aasan hy
lekin mushkil itna tha k:lahoul bus ho ga,E
koi wrongness ho tu sorry in advance:donno:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

nice try..waise jitni aasaan dikhti hai behr aur zameen utni aasaan hai nahi lolz

[Z.]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

walaikum salam Shummu
Mey behr seekh ker :D try kerti huN .... but try zaroor karun gi inshAllah

btw bohot payara missra hai :thmbup:

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

ZaRa ZaRa Bikharne Ko Jee Chaahtaaa Hai
'JunooN Se Guzarne Ko Jee Chaahtaaa Hai '

Check it please....

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

aww zara si chook ho gayi aap se...behr se khaarij ho gaya misra..

agar aap yun kar dein to behr mein aa jaayega..

zaraa sa bikharne ko jee chaahta hai


waise is baar koi entry aa nahi rahi lagta hai waqaii misra mushkil ho gaya is baar...

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

aww zara si chook ho gayi aap se...behr se khaarij ho gaya misra..

agar aap yun kar dein to behr mein aa jaayega..

zaraa sa bikharne ko jee chaahta hai


waise is baar koi entry aa nahi rahi lagta hai waqaii misra mushkil ho gaya is baar...

But Meine "Zara (Thorra)" Nahin Liya Tha, Meine To "ZaRa (Juz)" Liya Tha..To Kia Phir Bhee Be Behr Hai...

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

Mohabbat Main Ab Yeh Maqaam Aa Gaya Hai
'JunooN Se Guzarne Ko Jee Chaahtaaa Hai '

[MUTFANIN]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

لیجیےایک چٹپِٹی گرہ حاضرہے

کسی بوفےدعوت کےکھانےپہ رَش میں
جنوں سےگُزرنےکوجی چاہتاہے


Kisi bufe dawat kay khane pa rush mein
'JunooN se guzarne ko jee chaahtaaa hai '

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

'JunooN Se Guzarne Ko Jee Chaahtaaa Hai '
K Jaa'n Se Guzarne Ko Jee Chaahtaaa Hai

[Shahdil]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-4

Dil Ishq Kee Zindagee Chaahtaaa Hai
'JunooN Se Guzarne Ko Jee Chaahtaaa Hai '