Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

[shummu]

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke teesre muqaable ke saath haazir hun...

misra:

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa (waseem barelvi)

behr:

ma-faa-i-lun,fa-i-laa-tun,ma-faa-i-lun,fe-lun(fa-i-lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 2 1 2 , 2 2(1 1 2)

mashoor ghazal isi behr mein:

kabhii kisii ko mukammal jahaaN nahiiN miltaa
kabhii zamiiN tou kabhii aasmaaN nahiiN miltaa

Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 15th August

[Ali jee]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

hmmm nice
i will Try insha allah

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke teesre muqaable ke saath haazir hun...

misra:

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa (waseem barelvi)

behr:

ma-faa-i-lun,fa-i-laa-tun,ma-faa-i-lun,fe-lun(fa-i-lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 2 1 2 , 2 2(1 1 2)

mashoor ghazal isi behr mein:

kabhii kisii ko mukammal jahaaN nahiiN miltaa
kabhii zamiiN tou kabhii aasmaaN nahiiN miltaa

Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 15th August

Assalam o alaikum...

mujhay shairi ki Alif bey bhi nahi malom...na hi koi intrest he...bus is sher ko perhne ko bad aisai 2 lines yad agai aik serious aur aik tafreh...

to sub se pehli wli line pe hansna mana he.....koi nahi hase ga...372-shed372-shed

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa
mein ne tujhe dil de dia abb aur kia le ga.....

aur is line pe khub hanse....:)

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa
mere samne mera mobile cheen lia abb aur kia le ga....

[Kh@w@r]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

mujay abi b smaj nai aaye karna kia hai :(

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

aik koshish hazir-e-khidmat hai




giraa tha qadmoN mey tairey ke tuu uthhaa lega
ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa lega

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

mujahid jee aapki image nazar nahi aa rahi.

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

giraa tha qadmoN mey tairey ke tuu uthhaa lega
'ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa lega'

wah wah ..kya kehne...bahut hi umda!!!!!!!:thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

hmmm nice
i will Try insha allah

sure I'll wait :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Assalam o alaikum...

mujhay shairi ki Alif bey bhi nahi malom...na hi koi intrest he...bus is sher ko perhne ko bad aisai 2 lines yad agai aik serious aur aik tafreh...

to sub se pehli wli line pe hansna mana he.....koi nahi hase ga...372-shed372-shed

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa
mein ne tujhe dil de dia abb aur kia le ga.....

aur is line pe khub hanse....:)

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

mere samne mera mobile cheen lia abb aur kia le ga....

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lolzz tum bhi na ..meri hansi chooT gayi ye sher parh kar :khi:

ab chalo koi achcha sa serious sa sher ho jaaye...:thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

mujay abi b smaj nai aaye karna kia hai :(

aww... jo misra diya hai..us pe misra lagana hai :D:

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

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lolzz tum bhi na ..meri hansi chooT gayi ye sher parh kar :khi:

ab chalo koi achcha sa serious sa sher ho jaaye...:thmbup:

abb is zyada serious mein ne tukka laga sakta...
bus yeh akhiri try thi...itni achi to he :)

[vajiha]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

shummu dear acha silsila he lakin is meiN hameN kya karna he :donno:
me ko Girah lagani to ati hi nahiN372-haha

[vajiha]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

aww... jo misra diya hai..us pe misra lagana hai :D:

Misre par Misra 372-shock

[MUTFANIN]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Adab,Meri Mizahia koshish


yahi buhut he ke tu aj meri biwi he
``ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa ``

[*Rida*]

Re: Aaiye GIRAH Lagaiye-3

Salam ahl-e-bazm!

Aaiye Girah lagaiye silsile ke teesre muqaable ke saath haazir hun...

misra:

ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa (waseem barelvi)

behr:

ma-faa-i-lun,fa-i-laa-tun,ma-faa-i-lun,fe-lun(fa-i-lun)
1 2 1 2, 1 1 2 2, 1 2 1 2 , 2 2(1 1 2)

mashoor ghazal isi behr mein:

kabhii kisii ko mukammal jahaaN nahiiN miltaa
kabhii zamiiN tou kabhii aasmaaN nahiiN miltaa

Ummeed hai aap sab log barH chaRh ke hissa lenge aur is muqaable ko bhi kaamyab banayenge!

ek banda/bandi zyaada se zyaada 2 girah laga sakte hain ok!

Jeetne wali entry ko reputation point se nawaaza jaayega

Last date for ur entries: 15th August

Walaikom Assalm

aik shair perha tha Daag ka.....

hamaray samnay hans hans kay ghair say batain
yehi tu daagh kalaijay ko khaye jatay hain

bus aisay mairay zehen mein aik line aai....main nay Shairi sekhiye thread bhi nahin perha hai .....aur na hi is 1.2.2.1 ki samajh aarahi hai.... means mujhay is kay saath alfaaz set karna nahin aarahay.....

lakin zehen mein jo line aai hai woh likh rahi hoon...

laga kay aag seenay mein woh chala ghair kay saath
ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa

:hehe:
jis qisam ki entries aarahi hain...mairay khayal say yeh chal jai gi....



ab iske baad meraa imtihaan kyaa legaa