POLL: Aaiye GIRAH lagaiye-1

[shummu]

Sabhi ko salam!!

Mashallah se AAIYE GIRAH LAGAIYE silsile ki pehli qist bahut kaamyaab rahi...mujhe khushi hui ke bahut logon ne koshish ki jin mein se kuch logon ne to kaamyaab koshish ki :thmbup:


ye rahi SAB ki ENTRIES :rose


1. rah-e-junooN meiN ummeed-e-wafaa karo unse
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (GUL)

2. nibhaa wahi waade na jafaa karo unse
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (WASI ANJUM)

3. tire naseeb meiN hargiz likhaa na thaa ronaa
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (MUJAHID KHAN)

4. ifaa-e-waadah keh badle sazaayeiN woh dete haiN
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (KAHISH)

sehni paRengi zamaane ki sakhtiyaaN 'tahirah'
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (KAHISH)

5. Zamaane waaloN se gilah kyaa karte ho aye khurram
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (ROOMI)

6. Behtar hai yehi keh door door raha karo un sey
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (MASOOD)

apne dukhoN ka shikwah,na gilah karo unse
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (MASOOD)

7. dukhoN ki aaG meiN jalte raho sadaa ab tum
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (SHAKEEL)

8. Tu khaak hai pastiyoN ki woh aasmaan Thehra
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (sham-e-mehfil)

9. Ab kyun phirtey ho deewano ki tarhaN
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (XENYA)

10. tohfatan azyateiN hi milniN thiN unse
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (AINY GURYA)

11. sadaayeiN dete ho ab kyoN tamaam dunyaa ko?
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (MUTFANIN)


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ENTRIES JO BEHR MEIN HAIN


1. rah-e-junooN meiN ummeed-e-wafaa karo unse
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (GUL)


3. tire naseeb meiN hargiz likhaa na thaa ronaa
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (MUJAHID KHAN)


4. ifaa-e-waadah keh badle sazaayeiN woh dete haiN
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse'(KAHISH)


7. dukhoN ki aaG meiN jalte raho sadaa ab tum
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse'(SHAKEEL)


11. sadaayeiN dete ho ab kyoN tamaam dunyaa ko?
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse'(MUTFANIN)


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ENTRIES JINHE BEHR MEIN LAANE KI KOSHISH KI GAYI


5. Zamaane waaloN se gilah kyaa karte ho aye khurram
*zamane walo'N se kartey ho kia gila khurram?* (corrected misra)
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (ROOMI)


6. apne dukhoN ka shikwah,na gilah karo unse
*dukhoN ko ab na yuN shikwah gilah karo unse* (corrected misra)
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse'(MASOOD)


8. Tu khaak hai pastiyoN ki woh aasmaan Thehra
*wo aasmaaN,to bas ik khaak hai zameeN kii tuu*(corrected misra)
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (sham-e-mehfil)


9. Ab kyun phirtey ho deewano ki tarhaN
*kyo phirte rehte ho deewaane kii tarah ab tum?!* (Correctd Misra)
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse?!' (XENYA)

10. tohfatan azyateiN hi milniN thiN unse
*pataa tha badle meiN milniN thiN azyateiN tum ko* (Crrctd Misra)
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse?' (AINY GURYA)

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JO BEHR MEIN NAHI LAAYE JAA SAKE


2. nibhaa wahi waade na jafaa karo unse
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (WASI ANJUM)

6. Behtar hai yehi keh door door raha karo un sey
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (MASOOD)


aur ye misra still under discussion : :)

4. sehni paRengi zamaane ki sakhtiyaaN 'tahirah'
'kaha tha kisne ke ahd-e-wafaa karo unse' (KAHISH)

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to ye raha poore competition ka nichoR..ummeed hai aap sab ko ab vote dene mein khaasi aasaani hogi :salam: chunki kayi logon ne achchi girah lagayi hai isliye MULTIPLE VOTING ka option de rahi hun.


vote dein aur deserving candidates ki hausla afzaayi farmaayein..shukriya :thmbup:


ummmeed hai aayenda bhi itni hi garam joshi ke saath aap log hissa lete rahenge :salam:





LAST DATE FOR POLLING : 22nd July

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