phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare

[MeemSheenAlif]

i think kuch change hona chahie....

phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare
'Hue masjid se gum joote hamaare'

sadaa qismat ke aaGe hum hain haare..
rahe gardish meiN har dam kyoN sitaare?!

kaho usse lage mat muuNh hamaare!
dikhaa denge use hum din meiN taare!

kahaaN jaake bhalaa hum muuNh chupaayeiN?!
paRe rehte hain peeche sab kuNwaare!

koii aisi jagah hum ko bataaoo
jahaaN ho khoobsurat sab nazaare!

bhari mehfil meiN woh aise ghire haiN
ki jaise chaand ko ghaere sitaare!

ajab woh shaks hai,hum kyaa bataayeiN
hai meeThee boli ,akhyoN meiN sharaare!

kisee soorat nahii sudhrenge woh to
koii kitnaa bhi unko ab sudhaare!

by shummu :khi:

[shummu]

Re: phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare

lolz jiska kalaam post kiya hai kamaskam uska naam to likh dete :khi:

waise thanx ke meri mazaahiya ghazal tumhe is layaq lagi ke yahan share kiya jaaye magar dekho...kisi ko pasand aati bhi hai ya ..dande parte hain :khi:

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare

mein ne socha shair khud apna intro kur wai ga.....


dande hi pare gein..per mujhay ..yahan post jo kia he shayd yahan se move hojay :p

aur yeh kis ne kaha k laiq lagi to share ki :p

kher thanks for thanking me

[shummu]

Re: phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare

maine post yahan move kar di...

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare

mujhay is bat ka ilm tha .....


lekin is ka nahi app apne hi section mein post kur dein gi...

by the way app k pas kia saboot he k yeh app ki he :p :p :p
mein ne to net se li thi :p

[shummu]

Re: phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare

maine socha bazm-e-shairi mein aala kalaam post hote hain wahan is ghazal ka kya kaam isliye yahan move kar diya...:lpop: aur tumhari ammi ne bataya tha ke ye mera kalam hai..hai nahi to....

[MeemSheenAlif]

Re: phire haiN nange paaoN maare maare

he he he ....

ammi ko kis ne bataya?