qusoor

[Mujahid Khan]

[ahsaas]

Re: qusoor

buhat zaberdat kawish ...mature sharing ...khush rahiye

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: qusoor

very well written:thmbup::clap:
keep sharing with us

[Wafa]

Re: qusoor

har baar ke tarha bohot achi aur different ghazal likhi hai :thmbup:....really nice......keep sharing......:)

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: qusoor

buhat zaberdat kawish ...mature sharing ...khush rahiye

bohot bohot shukria muskan aap ki purjosh hosla afzaai k liyeethmbup:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: qusoor

very well written:thmbup::clap:
keep sharing with us

bohot bohot shukria aap ki hosla afzaai k liyeethmbup:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: qusoor

har baar ke tarha bohot achi aur different ghazal likhi hai :thmbup:....really nice......keep sharing......:)

bohot bohot shukria wafa her baar ki tarah khoobsoorat coments deney k liyeethmbup:

[lucky]

Re: qusoor

very nice:clap:

[Z.]

Re: qusoor

once again deyr khe wrora ...

khawshaal ossey

[zmufti]

Re: qusoor

Mujahid saheb
aap ki ghazal ke mazameen pasand aaye
aap ki ghazal ko dekhaiN to is meN
radeef: dekhiye
qaafiye: duur, gharoor faToor aboor manshoor huzuur mehSoor Qusoor
agar aap ghaur se dekhieN to maloom ho ga
manshoor mehsoor hamwazn heN
aur gharoor faToor aboor huzuur qusoor hamwazn heN


zindaN pe kis ne likh diyya jumhoriiat ka naam
pehre ki zad meN soch ko mehsoor dekhiye

aap ka yeh sher bahr ya rythm meN hai
is ko tukRoN meN baant'te heN

zindaN pe kis/ ne likh diyya/ jumhoriiat ka naam
pehre ki zad/ meN soch ko/ mehsoor dekhiye

aap aisa kijiye baaqi ashaar ko bhee tuRoN meN baantiye
aur dekhiye har tukRa rythm meN theek baith raha hai ya nahiN
regards
zmufti

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: qusoor

bohot bohot shukria zarqa jiaap ki islaah k liyee aur main aisey he koshish kar k daikhhta hoon jaisey aap nay araz kia hai,aik baar phhir aap ki islaah k liyee bohot bohot shukria:thmbup:

[naughty]

Re: qusoor

zabardast mujahid khan keep it sharing with us:thmbup: