dil-i-beemar

[Mujahid Khan]

[Wafa]

Re: dil-i-beemar

Dil-e-tabah ko dekh kar kyu hairaan ho tum
Dil-e-viran kabhi aabad teray pyaar say tha

Bohot khoob.....kaafi achi ghazal likhe hai.........har shair aik say barh kar aik.......khush rahein........:ff:

[ahsaas]

Re: dil-i-beemar

Buhat umdah ...Keep it up ..:phool:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: dil-i-beemar

Dil-e-tabah ko dekh kar kyu hairaan ho tum
Dil-e-viran kabhi aabad teray pyaar say tha

Bohot khoob.....kaafi achi ghazal likhe hai.........har shair aik say barh kar aik.......khush rahein........:ff:

wafa itnay achchay andaaz say coments karnay,ghazal pasand karnay aur hosla afzaai k liyee aap ka bohot bohot shukriathmbup:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: dil-i-beemar

Buhat umdah ...Keep it up ..:phool:

bohot bohot shukria muskan pasand karnay aur hosla afzaai k liyeethmbup:

[aquari]

Re: dil-i-beemar

"tu ney pehra laga dya meri soochoo pey tabbib
tujhey tu wastaa zalim dil -e- bemar sey thaa"

zaberdast..:clap:
he shair apni misal app haii...!
dil ki bamariyaa hazar hain mager ilaj "ek hi dawa" sey hojata haii :)

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: dil-i-beemar

bohat khubsoorat sharing hai :clap:

hamesha ki tarha bohat hi khubsoorat aur attractive likha hai aap ney

bohat shikwa aur mayussi payi jaati hai aap ki iss poetry mein

very nice:rose

keep it up :thmbup:

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: dil-i-beemar

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buhat khoob jeee...!:thmbup::rose
keep sharing

[lucky]

Re: dil-i-beemar

bohat khoobsoorat likha hai
amazing
keep it up

[shahid_naman]

Re: dil-i-beemar

tu ney pehra laga dya meri soochoo pey tabbib
tujhey tu wasta zalim dil -e- bemar sey tha

wha bai wha...
very nice shairy
hum kesi ko kaya batta app ka baray ma
hamara to sirf wasta app ka isshar sa tha.....