sitamm

[Mujahid Khan]

[jia]

Re: sitamm

very nice:em:
bohat achi ghazal likhi hay app ny
keep it up
b happy:rose

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: sitamm

very nice sharing jee:clap:
ghazal bohat pasand aayi hai:thmbup:
read karney ka bohat mazza aaya hai
keep it up jee

kuch jaggho par imla ki mistakes hai:blush:
but overall very nice:rose

[Wafa]

Re: sitamm

Bohot chahti ho mughe dil say magar maanti nahi
ye alag baat zuban say wo tum kahan na karo

over all poori ghazal achi lage :clap:......kaafi achay wordings use kea hai ....isse tarha achi achi ghazal likhtay rahay aur hamaray saath share kartay rahay.....:phool:

[ahsaas]

Re: sitamm

very Nice ....buhat khoob

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: sitamm

very nice:em:
bohat achi ghazal likhi hay app ny
keep it up
b happy:rose

bohot shukria jia hosla afzaai k liyeethmbup:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: sitamm

very nice sharing jee:clap:
ghazal bohat pasand aayi hai:thmbup:
read karney ka bohat mazza aaya hai
keep it up jee

kuch jaggho par imla ki mistakes hai:blush:
but overall very nice:rose

bohot bohot shukria rb dil say hosla fzaai k lliyee thmbup:
aur haan jahan bhi imla may ghalti ho please indicate kar dia karen taakeh main islaah karsakoon,by the way islaah karnay k liyee bhi bohot bohot shukriathmbup:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: sitamm

Bohot chahti ho mughe dil say magar maanti nahi
ye alag baat zuban say wo tum kahan na karo

over all poori ghazal achi lage :clap:......kaafi achay wordings use kea hai ....isse tarha achi achi ghazal likhtay rahay aur hamaray saath share kartay rahay.....:phool:

dil ki gehraai say pardhnay,pasand karnay aur dil say hosla afzaai karnay k liyee wafa ji aap ka bohot bohot shukriathmbup:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: sitamm

very Nice ....buhat khoob

bohot bohot shukria muskaan aap ka coments karnay k liyeethmbup:

[*Rida*]

Re: sitamm

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose
ahan...buht khooob........acha likha hai aap nay .........likhtay rehiye aisay hi ,....aur humain perhnay ka moqa daitay rehiye......

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: sitamm

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose
ahan...buht khooob........acha likha hai aap nay .........likhtay rehiye aisay hi ,....aur humain perhnay ka moqa daitay rehiye......

rida ji aap ka bohot bohot shukria pasandeedgi aur hosla afzaai k liyee,aap dua kijiyega aur hum inshaalaah likhhtey rahaingay,aik martaba phhir aap ka bohot shukriathmbup:

[neha_ahmad]

Re: sitamm

wah janab bohat hi achi poem hay.last shayr to bohat hi kamal ky hay.dil ki baat labon tak kaysay latay hain or phir un ko lafzon main dhalana to aap khob jantay ho aap.

[lucky]

Re: sitamm

good good
very nice
keep it up

[aquari]

Re: sitamm

poetry tu achi haii..:clap:
pr huroof-e-tahaji ki mistakes hian
zulf main ..zey+lam+fey
saza....seen+zey+ailf
please is ko check kr lainn

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: sitamm

poetry tu achi haii..:clap:
pr huroof-e-tahaji ki mistakes hian
zulf main ..zey+lam+fey
saza....seen+zey+ailf
please is ko check kr lainn

agree wid u..aquari
nice poetry janaab mujahid sahib:thmbup: