Subha honay ko hai

[Mahvish Waqas]

Assalam o alaikum wr wb

[thefire1]

Re: Subha honay ko hai

Bohat khoob, aap ki tehreer ka main fan banta jaa raha hoon aur srif main hi nahin har achi tehreer pasand karnay waala shaks aap ka fan bannay main fakhar mehsoos karay ga... aap nay bohat hi achay andaaz main uss subah ki amad ka zikr kiya hay jis ki muntazir har musalmaan ki aankh hay.... iss tehreer nay humari umeedon ko aik nayi rawish di hay jis kay liye aap ka bayhadh mashkoor hoon.

Apni kawishoon say humain mustafeed karti rahain... ek choti si observation hay issay taseeh nahin balkay khuwahish samjhyeh ga...

Subah hotay hi chanda bhi khoo jayay ga
Aur aghosh main thak kar so jayay ga (yeh misra kuch na mukammal sa lagta hay)

agar iss jagah

Din ki aghosh main thak kar so jayay ga

ho tou mukammal bhi lagta hay aur acha hay warna yehi gumaan rehta hay kay kis ki agosh main soyay ga :) shayed aap iss ki tashreeh kardain kiyonki aap hi moujib hain iss tehreer ki :)

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Subha honay ko hai

bahot khoob mehwish bahot khoobsurat Nazam likhi hai aap ne

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Subha honay ko hai

Assalam o alaikum wr wb..

Wasi bhai aap ka pasand karnay ka bohat shukria...
The fire sahab bohat shukria kay aap ko yeh kalam pasand aya...
Aap ne jis share ki janib tawaja dilai hai behad shukria aap ka kay aap ne is ki islah ki waqae ab misrah mukamal lag raha hai behad inayat aap ki :)

shukria..
Wasalam o alaikum wr wb

[Mani16]

Re: Subha honay ko hai

Wah wah wah Boht achhay janab
Kia baat hy aapki
Outstanding
ALLAH kare zor-e-kalam or Ziada

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Subha honay ko hai

Assalam o alaikum wr wb ...

Aap ka mera kalam pasand karnay ka bohat bohat shukria...
khush rahain...

[*Hala*]

Re: Subha honay ko hai

buht khubsurat lekhi hai .. be happy

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Subha honay ko hai

Assalam o alaikum wr wb ...

Aap ka mera kalam pasand karnay ka bohat bohat shukria...
khush rahain