Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

[Mahvish Waqas]

By Mehwish Afsar

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

Bahot khoob Mehwish bahot achha likha hai aap ne
share karti rahen
B,Happy

[Soulmate]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

wow really beautiful

[Gul]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe



Kuch urdu ki mistakes hein
baqi Welcome to poetry section :)

Share karti rahein inshaAllah jo kami hai wo poori ho ja-ay gee!

[maha17]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

nice halki phulki nazam hi mager jalde he app Rawani me Ayjao gi
keep it up .........

[maha17]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

Bht Khoob...:)

[uzair143]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

very nice

[Mahvish Waqas]

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Assalam o alaikum...
Bohat bohat shukria...

Apna khayal rakhya ga...
Aur duaoon main yaad...
Mehwish afsar

[MuQadas]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

walikum salam bohat khoob nice sharing

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

Assalam o alaikum..

Bohat bohat shukria
apna khayal rakhya ga...
Aur duaoon main yaad...
Dua go...
Mehwish afsar

[SADAFASLAM]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

Main Zindagi k tammam Sagar aur ...

zaberDast Mehwish

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

ASSALAM O ALAIKUM...

BOHAT BOHAT SHUKRIA
Apna khayal rakhya ga...
Aur duaoon main yaad...
Mehwish afsar

[Mani16]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

Boht piari Wording Use ki hy aapne
Boht pasand I
Nazm bhi achhi hy
Keep writing
Aap ek achhi sha,ira ban sakti hain
Or Insha ALLAH boht jaldd bun jayengi

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

ASSALAM O ALAIKUM...

BOHAT BOHAT SHUKRIA
Apna khayal rakhya ga...
Aur duaoon main yaad...
Mehwish afsar

[life.]

Re: Sipyoon K Khayal Sahil Pe

bohat khob