Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum

Kal bethey bethey kuchh zehan mein ussey qalamband kiya hai..

[Nadia khan]

Re: Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

Walikum Assalam
bahut hi zabardast likha hai aap ne
bahut hi umda shering
sada khush rahen
phool:

[thefire1]

Re: Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

Walaikum Assalaam Masood Bhai

Kia baat hay, bohat hi khoobsurat ghazal hay jo kay nazm numa hay, aik hi ehsaas aur aik hi baat ko itni shaestagi say kehna bohat hi mushkil kaam hay aap nay apnay kafiyon kay tasalsul ko jaari rakhtay huway apnay dili ehsaasat aur jazbaat ko bhi yakjaa rakha aur baRi aasaani say qalam band kardiya aisa laga jaisay aik aik hurf aap ki udaas dastaan bayan kar raha hoon aur uss WQAT-E-RUQSAT ko bayan kar raha hay jiss ki aap kay dil nay kabhi tamanna hi nahin ki thi........!

yeh shair hasil-e-ghazal laga mujhay, kitna gehrayi hay iss KHAMOSH chalnay main, KHAMOSH chal kar bhi kitni kuch keh rahay hain yeh do misray!!!

Khizaan ki pat jhar main zard pattoon per Masood
Bay Sabab chaltay jayain, waqt-e-rukhsat say pehlay

Bohat khoob isi tarah baith jaya karain, kiyonki aap kay baithnay say aap kay zehan say jo alfaz qalamband huway hain woh seedha dil cheer kay uss paar hogayay.... kabhi kabhi apnay aap say bhi milna bohat zaroori hota hay....

Maazrat zaroorat say ziyada lambi tajziya nigaari hogayi, kia karoon jab baat dil ko lagti hain tou dil apnay aap ungliyon per ghaalib hojaata hay :)

Khush rahyeh

Fi amaan ALLAH

[Mahvish Waqas]

Re: Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

Assalam o Alaikum WR WB...

Hamesha ki tarhan bohat hi khoobsorat kalam parhnay ko mila aap ki janib se...
Her laf apnay ander aik khoobsorti sametay howa hai..
Isi tarhan likhtay rahain aur hum se share kartay rahain ttakay humain bhi istafadah hasil hota rahay...
Shukria..
Khush rahain

[mano_billi]

Re: Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

apki ruksati horahi he? walima kab khane ko mile ga :think:

[Yaaram]

Re: Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

Maqta bohat hi khoob kaha hay, tamam ghazal parh ke suroor aaya :) Likhtey rahye bhai.

[thefire1]

Re: Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

:lol

apki ruksati horahi he? walima kab khane ko mile ga :think:

[Ehsaas786]

Re: Waqt-e-Rukhsat Sey Pehley

Walikum Assalam
bahut hi zabardast likha hai aap ne
bahut hi umda shering
buhut saari daad qubol kijiye
sada khush rahen ... Aameen