Apna Dor-e-Muhabbat Yaad Aata Hai

[Masood]

Aaj ki taza nazam :D

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Apna Dor-e-Muhabbat Yaad Aata Hai

Aaj ki taza nazam :D

aslaam_u_alikam

waah bohat khub masood sahib. aap ka yeh taza kalaam behad pasand aayaa. daad qubool kijiye.

[Masood]

Re: Apna Dor-e-Muhabbat Yaad Aata Hai

aslaam_u_alikam

waah bohat khub masood sahib. aap ka yeh taza kalaam behad pasand aayaa. daad qubool kijiye.

Ji qabool kar li hai daad ham ney :) aur pasandeedgi ka shukriyah :)

[Masood]

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Wah bohat achha likha hai masood... :rose kya kuchh chalta rehta hai dimagh mein aap key :D: Hmm Apna dor e muhabbat yaad aata hai..... achha kalaam hai...

Mera dimagh khatam ho chuka hai Mehak, shayid isi liye "jo bacha tha woh lutaney key liye aaey hain, aakhir geet sunenaney key liye aaey hain" - dekho kam himmat dam torti hai :)

[WOH LARKI]

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Kia kahoon??? alfaz hi nhi hein meray pass jo kuch keh sakoon! boht acha likha hey. waisay itna taveel tha aap ka daur e muhabbat? :D

[WOH LARKI]

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Kia kahoon??? alfaz hi nhi hein meray pass jo kuch keh sakoon! boht acha likha hey. waisay itna taveel tha aap ka daur e muhabbat? :D

[riyaz]

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:cc: Hunnn..Hunnnn.. sab theek to hai masood sb.
aaj ki taaza nazm aur basi mohabbat...khuda
khair kare... :tauba
its realy good poem:thmbup:

[Masood]

Re: Apna Dor-e-Muhabbat Yaad Aata Hai

Kia kahoon??? alfaz hi nhi hein meray pass jo kuch keh sakoon! boht acha likha hey. waisay itna taveel tha aap ka daur e muhabbat?

Dor-e-muhabbat taveel ho ya mukhtasir, dor-e-muhabbat hota hai, aur muhabbaton key bohat sey dard mushtarik hotey hain. Kuchh khud peh sahey jatey hain, aur kuchh mehsoos kiyey jatey hain :)

Hunnn..Hunnnn.. sab theek to hai masood sb.
aaj ki taaza nazm aur basi mohabbat...khuda
khair kare...
its realy good poem

Muhabbat ki kahaniyaan kabhi basi nahin hotin Riyaz sahib! Laila'Majnoon, Heer'Ranjha, Mirza'Sahiban aaj bhi usi shoq sey suni jati hai... :)

[shy]

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bohat khoob masood hamesha ki tarah bohat khubsurat poetry:thmbup:

[hayaa_n]

Re: Apna Dor-e-Muhabbat Yaad Aata Hai

Waah Waah Ta Ji aik aik lafz bouhat umda bouhat aala.yeh kalaam bhi bouhat pasand aaya.Saada aur umda kalaam.:masha :)

[Shaim]

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Buhaaaaaaaaat Khoooobsoorat:)

[Yaaram]

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Dor-e-Muhabbat hota hi yaad karne ka lye hay..Bohat kamal ka likha hay aap ne Barey bahi :)

[Baad-e-Saba]

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buhat umda

[Ehsaas786]

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very very nice

[thefire1]

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Assalaam-O-Alaikum

Kia baat hay Masood Sahab, bohat hi khoobusrat kalaam hay, aisa lagta hay kay yaadi-e-maazi rag-O-jaan main kout kout kar basa hua hay, gokay iss nazm ko likhay aik arsa beet chuka hay magar yeh ehsaas kitnay TAAZA lagtay hain, waqayi insaan kabhi bhi unn khoobsurat lamhoon ko nahin bhula sakta jo kay uss kay dil main aik MERAAS ki tarah bas chukay hain aur zindagi main jab bhi apnay aap say milnay ka mouqa milta hay tou inho yaadoon kay saharay woh apnay aap ko MEHZOOZ karta hay!!!

Likhtay raha karain, bohat arsay say aap ka koi TAAZA kalaam manzar-e-aam per nahi aaya, khush rahyeh :)

Fi amaan ALLAH