Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum

Bohat muddat baad kuchh likha hai....

[ahsaas]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

Assalamo allaikum

Bohat muddat baad kuchh likha hai....

Wah ...Fantastic..!!
Her lafz Ehsaas se bhara ..buhat hi khoobsorti se Dill ki kafiyat biyaan ker diye ap ney.:rose
likhty rahein ..intizar rahy ga:)

[ahsaas]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

"AIK HI SAANS MEIN SUNA DETA MEIN RODAD-E-ISHAQ
MERE HONTON PE HATH RAKH K WOH RO PARE THY"

kitni sachai hai in lafoz mein ..:)

[farri]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

very good.....bhot acha likha hai....

[farri]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

:salam::)

[laila]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

zaberdast je:clap: jitni bhi tareef ki jay otni hi kam

[La'hasil]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

Oh hooooo



Kia baat hai Buhat Khoob

[zmufti]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

Masood saheb
aap ki ghazal kuch din pehlay dekhi thii
ghazal meN aap ne achche mazameen baandhe heN
maiN aap ke ashaar kuch tabdeeli ke saath bahar meN kar post kar rahi huuN
umeed hai aap ko bura nahiN lage ga
regards
zmufti

aap ke har sher ke muqabil red color meN apni tajweez di hai

mafool/ mufaaeel/mufaeel/faolun

yaadoN ko samaituuN to kayyii saal lagieN ge
logon ko sunaata kyaa jo be tab khaRe the


yaadoN ko samaitne meN maah-o-saal pare the
daastaan-e-ishq sunne ko log tayaar khaRe the

roodaad-e-muhabat maiN kahiN naam na aaye
yeh keh ke juda ham se vo har baar hue the

aik hi saans meN suna deta maiN roodaad-e-ishq
mere hoNtoN pe vo haath raskh ke ro pare the


1. jazbaat ke toofaan maiN ham ghir se gayye the
Sadme jo judaaii ke hamieN tu ne diyye the

dobte hue dil ki nabzeN bikhar rahi thiiN
bipharte hue jazboN ke saaghar chalak pare the

khushioN se bhara hai jo chaman aaj tumhara
ham ne bhee wahiiN to apne armaan gaRe the

boya hai jahaN tu ne apni shaadmaanioN ka phool
ussi zameeN meN maiN ne apne armaan gaRe the


Is aankh ko kassa na kahieN aap khudara
ashkoN ke sitaarey bhee yahiiN se to jhaRe the

na ToR isse aye zaalim yeh kaasa hai meri aankhoN ka
ashkoN ke chaand sitaaroN se yeh moti jaRe the


is ishq ne masood ko choRa na kahiN ka
karne ko to duniya meN buhat kaam pare the

ishq ne kar diyya hai tamaam jahaN se la taaluq
karne ko duniya meN masood kaam bare the

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

boya hai jahan tum ne apni shadmaniyon ka phool
usi zameen mein mene apne armaan garay thay

waaah kitni ghehrai se likhi gai hai ye gazal
ek ke lafz mein kitni ghehrai hai lajawab janab

[ArAbIaN gIrL]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

wah zabardast
kya hum isse design ker sakte hian?

[Masood]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

wah zabardast
kya hum isse design ker sakte hian?

Zah-e-Naseeb :)

[KurriPunjaban]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

Masood Sahib Eshak ho to pher kaam kaisy?

[Masood]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

Masood Sahib Eshak ho to pher kaam kaisy?

Yehi to kaha hai keh warney karney ko duniya mein kaam badey they :p

[KurriPunjaban]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

Yehi to kaha hai keh warney karney ko duniya mein kaam badey they :p

Eshak...............................Hay kash logon ko samaj ajay....
u know resently main ny teen books parhi hain
Eshak ka ain
eshak ka sheek
aur eshak ka kaaf


kia baat hy eshak kee..amzing books

[Masood]

Re: Yadon Ko Sametney Mein Maah-o-Saal Parrey They

Ishq ka Sheen to yeh hai:
http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=11193

aur haan ji ishq ki kya hi batein hai, kabhi pedah kabhi pinhaa, kabhi zahir kabhi posheedah, kabhi wisal, kabhi hijar, kabhi aabadi kabhi barbadi :)
http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=9199

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php?t=264